Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
When it comes to the issue the important quality of a roommate, it is quite normal that people may have different opinions about it. According to my experience and observation, a roommate must be helpful, trustworthy, and does not be nosy. Following, I try to explain my reasons clearly.
The first and important feature is that a roommate does not be nosy. I think that nothing is hateful than having pry person around you, because you never feel privacy. I think that here is not a better example than myself when I was in the university. At that time, I as a student who did not receive any financial aid from family or university had to live in a small apartment with another my classmate. He liked to know everything about my life, even though it was a private. In the beginning, I tolerate his behavior, while since I was aware that he opened my personal letters, which were my mother. I preferred to leave thee and back on campus. Since, if you want to have a private life, do not allow a nosy person live with you.
A further point we must consider is that you can be more success in the university, if you have a smart roommate. I think that a small instance can give some light on this issue. After I backed on the dormitory, I had to take a room with another student, who was a best in their major. He assisted me to acquire many achievements in my major. Moreover, I learn of him for being a successful person in academic education; I should have discipline; manage my time and source, and more focus on my aims. Eventually, I not only graduate from my university with best grades but also apply for an outstanding university in the United States. I admit that my roommate had a crucial role in my successes.
Apart from points I made above, another quality that a roommate should have a sense of humor. As we all know, students usually left home for first time and have not been enough experience about unknown environment, which affect their spirit negatively. Hence, having a roommate, who is fun, can help us to adapt quickly with new life. In addition, he makes an intimacy atmosphere in a room and fills you with fresh energy to continue your education.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that a good roommate must be helpful, reliable, and does not be spying. Last but not least, I hope that all students pay more attention to select their roommates, because it would be an integral part of their lives when they are studying in the university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ke a room with another student, who was a best in their major. He assisted me to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en they are studying in the university.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.180555555556 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.156746031746 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093253968254 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.115079365079 0.0685040099705 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.015873015873 0.0351676179071 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.6176469765 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0873015873016 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198412698413 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2497.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 448.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57366071429 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294642857143 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220982142857 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158482142857 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0959821428571 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6176469765 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533482142857 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 62.3161747444 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9054928591 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.041666667 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 40.7648809524 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.00621118012 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258367344855 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0751313013587 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0623021370677 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.427856251105 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114776952405 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842847354181 0.114077575197 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451767342007 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288132606955 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0931244990092 0.067059652881 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170090299272 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380434381847 0.0618886996521 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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