Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some important qualities of a good roommate?
It seems among so many different qualities that a good roommate should have, very difficult to prefer one to another. Some students would like to share their rooms with reliable persons and other people prefer to have kind roommates. From my point of view, a good roommate should be helpful, considerate and responsible. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, a helpful and kind friend can help me cope with various difficulties in the new environment. For example, if I become sick, he will take me to hospital and help me recover. Besides, a good roommate will prepare delicious foods like soup for his patient friend, clean up the room, and wash dirty dishes or other activities. He may have extra information about city, social events and cheap malls so he share this information with his roommates.
In the second place, a good roommate is considerate. He never invites his friend late in the midnight or talk with his cell phone loudly. In addition, a considerate friend never smokes, drinks or other annoying activities in a limited space like dormitory rooms. He knows that his roommates want to study during mid-term or final exams so if he does not want to study, he will not distract them.
Last but not least, a good roommate is responsible. If he has specific responsibilities like cleaning the room, he will do his job perfectly. For example, last year, I wanted to go to my hometown but I could not find any person to take care of my stuff. So that I asked my roommate help me and since he was a responsible person, he took care of my cloths and books very well.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that there are several important characteristics that a good roommate should have. But I find myself more inclined to choose helpfulness, responsibility and consideration based on the reasons which I outlined above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
It seems among so many different qualities that a good roommate should h...
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Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'shares'.
Suggestion: shares
...ty, social events and cheap malls so he share this information with his roommates. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, for example, in addition, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82530120482 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84545308881 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2990119077 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21372441197 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766220363405 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757753468786 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127612602761 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063879841107 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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