Due to advences urbanisation, The urban cities has significantly changed that have effect on the way of people’s live. As the World becomes more global, people have to move big cities to make a obident living from rural areas. When they migrate they carry their belief but in time, they loose it Some people believe that neighborhood who is integritable individual have significant importance in our daily life. Some others adhere to the this iade and claim that being friendly is more necessary. I am with the second proposal and lines below will shad on light my viewpoint.
First of all, the foremost idea coming to my mind is that why friendship is significant that the other is tolerant. Thanks to stress of worklife or competition, everybody have good or bad times in their lives. Some individials reduce their stress by listen loudly music, others relax by sleeping. While people want to reduce their stress. Neighborhoods can be helpful and be tolerate their noise pollution. If your neirborhood a friend of yours, this can be helpful.
In addition to the importance of tolerant, it is significant consider that if you are a good friend with your neighborhood you can have more enjoyable time. To clarify it, take my experience. When I was a student at university i had a neighborhood who is a student like me. We used to watch the movie every Friday that was both our off day. He and I used to play station everyday. These event made us more close.
Last but not least, there are numerous outcomes if your neighborhood is a good friend. By the way of example, when you struggling make a living he or she can lead money. Moreover if you have a challange you can share with him or her.
Take all aforemost mentions reasons into account, it would be concluded that Friendship is most important feature in neighborhood. Nowadays, it is becomming more and more remarkable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... people have to move big cities to make a obident living from rural areas. When t...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...n our daily life. Some others adhere to the this iade and claim that being friendly is m...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...loudly music, others relax by sleeping. While people want to reduce their stress. Nei...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ime. To clarify it, take my experience. When I was a student at university i had a n...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nce. When I was a student at university i had a neighborhood who is a student lik...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... off day. He and I used to play station everyday. These event made us more close. Las...
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Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'These events'?
Suggestion: This event; These events
...He and I used to play station everyday. These event made us more close. Last but not lea...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to make'
Suggestion: to make
...the way of example, when you struggling make a living he or she can lead money. More...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...make a living he or she can lead money. Moreover if you have a challange you can share w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... neighborhood. Nowadays, it is becomming more and more remarkable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, in addition, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81595092025 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79972469249 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579754601227 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3354323296 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3636363636 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11304663682 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333030516874 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345960634521 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603063961759 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349211201875 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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