People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Nowadays, people face difficulties in some life aspects which could be the reason for stress. They tend to get out of stress in different ways. Some relax by reading books, some by watching television and others by hanging out with friends. In my opinion, it is more advantageous to watch television especially movies to relieve stress. Additionally, going out with friends would help to deal with stress. I will present my opinion about the method of reducing stress with some examples.
First of all, watching favorite movies could help to heal the stress because it interferes with one’s mind of thinking about the difficulties they are feeling and think about the story they are watching. For example, when I lost my mother 3 years ago, I went through very tough moments like the guilt of not being there during her final moments. I started thinking of the best way to reduce my stress until I found out about watching movies especially comedy ones. These movies distracted my stress a lot and made me calm.
Secondly, spending time with friends could have an essential role in minimizing stress because good friends are considered the best cure for life’s conflicts. For instance, hanging out with friends was the other way I used to reduce the stress I mentioned in the previous paragraph. My friend knew all my strengths and weaknesses which helped them figure out the best way to spend time, so I won’t spend time thinking or crying. Which made me think that I’m not alone and there were good people who were there for me.
In conclusion, everyone could go through stressful times which have nothing to do with our characters. The key success to deal with that stress is to find the best way to sooth it and go through it. Watching T.V, or spending time with friends could be the best way to reach that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76340694006 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4367119866 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4883031708 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262763148525 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101218859292 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529384990191 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170329288954 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391734491238 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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