People living in small towns or villages are more satisfied with their lives than those living in big cities.
As a matter of fact people have different ideas about a place which they want to live in. Some of them prefer to be in a small town and some of them think otherwise. There are some advantages and disadvantages about both life styles, but in my view, I strongly believe that people in the small cities are happier in their life. There are many positive points about villages such as paying less money and saving time.
First and foremost, residence of small towns can save money. Most expenses are cheaper in small population cities. For instance, I used to live in California for one year. I rent a one bedroom apartment in a mediocre area in the vicinity of San Diego. I was paying 2000 dollars pay month for that condo. My salary was 3000 and I had some other expenses such as oil or grocery stuff. After a while I decided to move to North West Arkansas. I think I did a smart move, because I can save 2000 dollars per month now.
Second, small towns are peaceful. A person who likes to be in a calm atmosphere would be satisfied in small towns, because in these kinds of small cities, there are no traffic jam. Additionally, there is smaller population. Consequently, fewer number of people, will make lower noises. Furthermore some people oppose this point by telling that these kinds of towns has no facilities, so they prefer to have some trouble instead of being in a rural part. Everybody should be aware of some new changes in last decades. Obviously, in most of small town, people have high speed internet and chain stores, so nowadays there is not a big differences between a big city and a small town.
Last but not least, people can save time in villages. People in big cities such as Irvine should wake up earlier and leave their home sooner to avoid of traffic in rush hours in the morning. On the other hand, people in rural area do not need to be accurate about the time. As everybody knows, in most roads in small towns people drive fast and they do not need to stop hours in highways. For example, people in Los Angeles have to leave their home as fast as they can in the morning, because they do not want to be in the middle of crazy traffic.
To sum up, living in a small town is not only useful for family's budget, but also is necessary for feeling peace.
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about a place which they want to live in.
about a place where they want to live in.
these kinds of towns has no facilities
these kinds of towns have no facilities
nowadays there is not a big differences
nowadays there is no big differences
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 422 350
No. of Characters: 1806 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.532 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.28 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.207 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.88 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.081 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.64 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.484 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As a matter of fact people have different ...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... expenses such as oil or grocery stuff. After a while I decided to move to North West...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...mber of people, will make lower noises. Furthermore some people oppose this point by tellin...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'in my view', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245202558635 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.147121535181 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0980810234542 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426439232409 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.044776119403 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144989339019 0.118717715034 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0213219616205 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3112466645 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277185501066 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00426439232409 0.00188951952338 226% => OK
Determiners: 0.0746268656716 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0170575692964 0.0209618222197 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00426439232409 0.0139019557991 31% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2289.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 422.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42417061611 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.258293838863 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.170616113744 0.251872472559 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0971563981043 0.174417080927 56% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0616113744076 0.112833075102 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3112466645 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509478672986 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.1564558525 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.88 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4289560573 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.56 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.88 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.68 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 33.9416113744 45.7405998639 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.75454545455 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335398292266 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0965090892168 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783853790245 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.459238153808 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192936710226 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108946926869 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826946987852 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.268843577546 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0673927932012 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198701013825 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537582742539 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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