People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
This is a very debatable question. If we want to come up with some suitable answers to this question, we would need to look at the pros and the cons of this question, and then draw conclusions. It would depend upon educational backgrounds and individual personalities as well as the situation that we are in.
In my opinion that experiences play a crucial role in everyone's life and career is an undeniable fact.
Should people realize the significance of experiences in their life and studies, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously.
These days, recognizing a difference between children and adults has recently been the topic of debate among psychologist and people in our province.
I do believe that experiences during our life can make us an adult. There are a lot of different reasons with high value that support my point of view, and I would like to further illustrate a few of the most important ones in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to mention one of the primary reasons that graduate in college is a kind of experience which makes us an adult. University is the best place for growth because we can become familiar with different people with different backgrounds and different culture as well as different behavior. Connecting with these students can help us to improve our communication which is useful in the future.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that traveling is another thing which makes us an adult. Thanks to military period, not only can we make new friends, but also we become familiar with the different situation on different occasions. For instance, in my country, each person who has 18-years old have to go military. In this period that it is 21 months long, we cannot see our parents, we stay in garrison until 21 months. We have to control our behavior, and we have to take away our bad habits like sleeping until noon.
Last but certainly not least, thinking about this question more meticulously, I would like to mention this point that marriage is other events which makes us an adult. After marriage we know the meaning of rules and regulation and the philosophy behind them, therefore, we try to respect together more than before. After marriage we become mature, they become mentally mature and physically mature, therefore, we can handle the burdens of problems.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well. Adulthood is not depended upon our age. It depends on our mental behavior and our decisions, and so forth. After passing time, we gain a lot of experiences with our environment. These experiences can make us an adult.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the disadvantages of experiences in people's life is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to understanding important factors which make us an adult, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Suggestion:
...dult, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, well, another thing, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94787644788 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86529477256 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509652509653 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9967011573 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9259259259 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1851851852 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96296296296 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200238556297 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617837516746 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632649280303 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975585827938 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505696344359 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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