People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Ability to work is inherent to people since the beginning of humankind. Despite being tightly connected with profit throughout most of the history, there is more to work than purely earning money. Some studies have even shown that people would continue to go to work even if they win the lottery. Are you wondering why? In this essay some other benefits of work will be explored and reasons why it is important will be provided.
Firstly, each and everyone’s life has a certain structure necessary to keep life in order. Work is one part of that structure, enabling people to get the same routine day after day, which at the end brings more security. Otherwise they would get bored, depressed and anxious. For instance, studies have shown that employed people have better mental health than the unemployed ones. Since unemployment leads to mental health issues, working will brings more structure and stability to ones life.
In addition, people are social creatures and need company to sustain themselves. Therefore, it is important to interact with others on a daily basis, which is another reason why work is important apart from earning money. In fact, if one does not work for some time it can easily happened that one gets socially isolated. Having interactions is an important part of life as it boosts morale and leads to a more satisfied life. The aforementioned argument is a proof that work is beneficial for maintaining social skills and interactions.
Finally, education is an important part of our life course. We follow educational program for most of our childhood and early adulthood. For that reason it is valuable and important for people to be able to see the practical part of their education - the work part. For example, if a person goes to medical school, the possibility for applying that knowledge in everyday situations is an inevitable part of becoming a professional.Therefore it is important to have a work as a platform for applying new insights and gained knowledge.
To sum up, work is playing a big role in human existence, not only because it allows getting paid, but for many other reasons. Some of them are the following: the routine work brings in everyday life, the possibility of social interaction with others and of course the ability to apply knowledge gained through education. Either way one looks at it, work is a crucial part of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96526054591 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81685669654 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51364764268 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.270819319 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9545454545 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3181818182 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269165061384 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833048227694 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549616084085 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166620056641 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608207507986 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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