A person you know is planning to move to your hometown or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
One famous poet said that there is no better place on the planet than home town. I consider myself lucky since I was born in one the most astonishing cities in the world, in Moscow. If a person I know wants to move there, he will definitely like Moscow, because this is the city of great opportunities and nobody gets bored in there. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, Moscow is the place where almost everyone can build marvelous career. There is myriad of universities in the city, where every person, who are willing to excel, is able to obtain education. Advanced education is priceless nowadays, since modern business system request having particular knowledge and skills in order to get a job. If a person successfully graduates a college or university in the capital of Russia, he is likely to grow through the ranks of any company quickly and build the satisfied future. Although people could get the top even in a small town, it easier to attain that in the city like Moscow. Because of that, the person, who live and study in Moscow, will never have problems with finding a job.
Secondly, Moscow is the place where everyone is able to find thigs to do. The capital has tremendous amount of museums, theaters, exhibitions and other interesting places to visit. Moreover, scores of churches, which are presented there, expose their own architectural stile, and can tell a lot about character of people living in Russia. If someone wants to look at all famous objects in Moscow, he needs to spend weeks in the city, in case to visit them. Despite an opinion, that Moscow overcrowded and has too dense traffic, the beauty and magnificence of the city overcome these disadvantageous. To that end, if the person moves to Moscow, he will never be bored, but will be able to roam in Moscow and explore the city.
To sum it up, I feel that the person will appreciate my hometown. This is because of feasibility of gaining career grow and prospective of fulfilling a variety of activities. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that even if Moscow has some traffic problems and very dense population, the life could be great in there!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70680628272 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61641848307 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.152663617 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6315789474 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148968774252 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473931876286 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389379609078 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976685927362 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300993337538 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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