Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them
Before tendering my opinion, I guess it is crucial to take quick glance at this argument on both sides. Many people hold the view that the children have to play computer games to get fun. But others believe that playing computer games is not acceptable for children. On my perspective I concur with the first group of people whose agree that kids need to stop playing computer games because of numerous reasons why I subscribed to a distinct attitude elaborating cogently in subsequent paragraphs.
First reason coming in my mind consolidating my standpoint is that playing computer games let the children get distracted. Although some studies claim that playing computer games will affect children’s brain. For instance, my minor brother had an autism because he was playing computer games alone when he was at age of six. Additionally, that influence his personality by getting more loneliness. In contrast to other children which they are more socialize and friendly.
Second reason is that kind of games will decrease their intelligence level as well. To be more specific, I should mention that every notion and concept that every children learn through life will gradually build his or her fundamental knowledge in the future. If they don't pay attention to this particular matter, the children probably would study their materials neglectful, which result superficial knowledge for them in the future because they distracted their minds.
Additionally, the third reason which deserves some words here advocating my attitude is that fully understanding that playing computer games they will lose their talents and skills. Instead of being creative to show up their liability and vulnerability. They will getting laziness and less creative as well. Nowadays, Children are not able to focus on a thing because they couldn’t give an attention to the more useful issues in this life.
To put it briefly, I strongly agree that playing computer games is not accebtable for children. In a nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicity of other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mental knowledge in the future. If they dont pay attention to this particular matter...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... liability and vulnerability. They will getting laziness and less creative as well. Now...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, second, so, third, well, for instance, i guess, in contrast, in fact, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2893982808 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86922085333 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2672678064 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361530834757 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120987999968 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104882814943 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206939712865 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721443066941 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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