From beginning the dawn of civilization to modern times, happiness has played important role in each society. Even though the obstacles of life made hard to be happy, individuals found a way to be happy. Some people think the main goal is success and it brings happiness, other people say happiness alone is enough without success. I am with the second idea because of several reasons and the lines below will shed on my viewpoint.
First of all, the first reason coming to my mind is the meaning of live. Everybody have different purpose which make their life meaningful. Some of them find happiness in money, others found it in dignity. But what if they can earn money enough. Therefore, I believe that people will be happy if they find the meaning of live. Success is not always source of happiness,so they should find it.
The another significant reason which deserve to be written some words is health reasons. According to a research study conducted at MIT, by a reputable team of scientists, it was found that persons who are optimistic live more than persons who are successful. It shows that persons should try to be pleased not success. Moreover, Happiness eases tension and decreases blood pressure. Furthermore, it is needless to say that happiness and optimism have another benefits such as enjoying the life, having good relationship and having good friends.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons which can be persuasive enough to support my stanpoint. I highly recommed that people should find the way to be happy without success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04230769231 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65511396695 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2999187909 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1176470588 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143666068746 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433292718501 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418820071883 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865730456738 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244760634383 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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