resent a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes – the government or the people who build the homes?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Safety procedures are very essential for the construction of residential building. In my opinion, the government is the one who is approving the plans and designs of the house. So they are fully responsible for the safety measures for the real estate.
Firstly, the residential buildings need pre approval from the ruling party to initiate the construction. The person is submitting all the required documents for plan and location to the municipality are used to visit the place to check any controversy with the residential building standard or any violation with the ruler and regulation of constructing houses. After that, the government provides sanction to proceed the construction. This is the methodology going in my hometown. So from this, the government is fully answerable for all causes would happen, not the civilians.
Secondly, the civilians who are constructing the apartment are responsible only for the materials which uses for the building and the interior architecture. In developed countries, the corporation have their own safety procedures and construction codes to build the residential buildings. For example, on October 1989, the resident in Newyork build a house in his/her registered land. He got admitted all the documents needed for the construction including safety precaution. But unfortunately, the building was collapsed after two years. Because the soil in that particular location was not suitable to withstand the building mass and the foundation was not grasped with the base of the apartment. This case was taken to the government for justice. After the investigation, the government announced that the officer who did not do follow the safety rules for that apartment. The government took over the responsibility and paid all money to the resident.
In the conclusion, the corporation or municipality are the main concern to implement the standards and safety rules to the residents who are constructing the homes, not the civilians.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276470588235 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0866891130778 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382352941176 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0147058823529 0.0685040099705 21% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.102941176471 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0411764705882 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15956401335 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0323529411765 0.0309702414327 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.185294117647 0.0887237588012 209% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00294117647059 0.0209618222197 14% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1981.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 309.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.41100323625 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368932038835 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323624595469 0.251872472559 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.284789644013 0.174417080927 163% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.216828478964 0.112833075102 192% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.15956401335 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501618122977 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.4576065497 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1666666667 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5182156447 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.055555556 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.644075263715 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 49.5291262136 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.10294117647 1.45489161554 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424189303866 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121661032557 0.103427244359 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0578190110686 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.627641495824 0.497263757937 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153044391638 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217146440619 0.114077575197 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768572065022 0.0781384742642 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.664103405808 0.336927656856 197% => Paragraphs have same ideas.
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0553460906305 0.067059652881 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360860826797 0.210909579961 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167380272662 0.0618886996521 27% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.