s give students the flexibility to choose to live in dorms on campus or in apartments in nearby communities . Would you prefer to live on campus or off campus and why?use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Before tendeing my opinion i guess it is cruical to take quick glance on this argument on both sides. Some students prefer living on campus. But others belive that living off campous in apartment near to communities is much better. I concur with the first group of students whose they agree that living on campus will make a lot of different. It's seems very resonable to me because of numerous reasons why i subscribe to a distenct attitute elaborate congently in subsequent paragraphs.
First reason coming to my mind consolidating my standpoint is if students live on a campus that will saving their times and money as well. Moreover, that will be not that much far from their collegeor university and that impact student's life in positively way. For instance, i was living on campus and that idea didn't waste my time by coming from far distance so it influence my educational level by getting high scores in my exams. So, i didn't realize that untill the day when my result show up. Students can raise their fundamental knowledge by saving thier time.
Second reason we need to give it some attention is being inside the campus much safer for students. That will protect their lives from cars accident if they have limited time to be at the school or university. Furthermore, they wouldn't need to come on certain time to attend their lectures, meetings, and classes as well. For example, one of my best friend she passed away according to car accident because she was driving from her apartment with higher than the speed limit to catch up her class. That unfortunately end up her life.
Additionally, living near to university or school allow students to get new friends. Friendship is one of the essential relation in our entire life. Plothera of students prefer staying with their friends. They can studying, playing any kinda of sport and shopping together. Many studies claimed that good friendship relation build up people's personality and increase their intellegant level by getting more experience and skills from friends and becoming more socialized. In contrast to students whose choose to live in apartment near to commuinites, they will prefer to be alone also they may don't getting new friends.
To but it in a brief, I strongly agree that living on campus considered more convenient and much easier than living in apartment with few miles away from whatever school or university. Actually, Students will build our countries with alot of thrives and prosperity so that's why we need to let them focusing on thier future without any distraction. In a nutshell, in fact, there are multiplicities of other factors supplementing the aforementioned statements, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i guess, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96328293737 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70203275678 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535637149028 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2126186514 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2916666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238644358981 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762149432715 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920522767975 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145806117175 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782328389799 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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