Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When it comes to the issue the importance of the uniform in schools, some people believe that students should wear same clothes in the school. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that the uniform assists families’ revenue. Because of the love, parents hardly refute to purchase clothes for their children, even though they do not need it yet. In fact, students usually do not each maturity and less considers money, so they like to buy everything, which imposes many costs on their families. Hence, when students have to wear the same clothes in the school, their family can save much money. In addition, we comprehend this policy, when we know that some families can not afford to purchase even a new clothes for their children every year, and the school can be disgust places for their children when the can not wear different clothes every year. In this way, this policy gives the sense of equality to all students, which impacts their spirit positively.
A further point we must consider is that this policy leads students to pay more attention on their education. Indeed, students usually tend to be unique and wear the different clothes, which can disrupt learning process. I think that a small example can give some light to tis matter. Imagine one of your classmates come the class, while he wear exotic clothes. It is very quite normal that he draws others’ notice and causes student can not focus on what the teacher say. So, this policy allows students to notice more on their educations and increase their performance.
In contrast, some people believe that wearing the same cloths in the schools violates students’ freedom. I admit that every one has right to wear everything, which are his favorable, while sometimes, we have to ignore some our rights to achieve better things.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that the uniform helps families to save money, and increase students’ learning performance. Of course, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that the uniforms can violate students’ freedom. Nonetheless, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean '(clothes)'?
Suggestion: (clothes)
...s can not afford to purchase even a new clothes for their children every year, and the ...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...ent clothes, which can disrupt learning process. I think that a small example can give ...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wears'.
Suggestion: wears
...our classmates come the class, while he wear exotic clothes. It is very quite normal...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24025974026 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.151515151515 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0649350649351 0.0866891130778 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0562770562771 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0627705627706 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0887445887446 0.118717715034 75% => OK
Participles: 0.00865800865801 0.0351676179071 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.59765411542 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101731601732 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021645021645 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.021645021645 0.0139019557991 156% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2394.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 392.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10714285714 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380102040816 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293367346939 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186224489796 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0892857142857 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59765411542 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 62.7654105015 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.370077518 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.0034013605 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.248 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270051038186 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0821593155114 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.072448288908 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492063101742 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135169289385 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101692234674 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718604255073 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.319745761443 0.336927656856 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0879215185157 0.067059652881 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181465028827 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576146487151 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.