Some people are very organized, while other are not so organized. which type of person are you?
The sentence "Some people are very organized, while other are not so organized" is a complex an controversial statement. I cannot place myself in one of the category completely. I provide situations where I am organized and where I am not in the following paragraphs.
In general every human perform several tasks every day. Every task demands us to take or make decisions. And as human life is the perfect example of "Multi Tasking" we come across still more decisions and tasks to complete with certain restrictions and with given certain constraints. So to perform all these with no fail we make "PRIORITIES". Prioritizing is a phenomenon in which we assign some specific time and duration for a task. This is very helpful in completing a task with given constraints.
When it comes to me as every human i even prioritizes the things. But I will not perform every task with properly organizing the things. The movement I prioritize the tasks I give more importance to the task which bears high priority. In such tasks I develop the process called "organization", which according to me a step-by-step procedure to perform a task in efficient manner. For example, based my goal and aim the categories which fall into my higher priorities are: assignments, homework , writing journals on subject related matters. So whenever I encounter any of these kind tasks I perform the things in organized manner so that the resultant outcome will be a subtle one.
On the other hand there are things that bear low priority such things never ever demand for organized structure of performing or completing an activity or task. The task which according to me fall in the category of low priority are: watching a movie, playing games, cooking food etc. These need not be performed with proper plan because these are not those kind of task which demands one's full attention (in context of me, besides their may be people whose profession involves these activities and who need a lot of focus).
As I have provided enough reasons and examples in context of my life, I finally conclude by placing myself in both the categories partially.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are not so organized' is a complex an controversial statement. I cannot place...
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...mpleting a task with given constraints. When it comes to me as every human i eve...
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...en it comes to me as every human i even prioritizes the things. But I will not perform ever...
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...er priorities are: assignments, homework , writing journals on subject related mat...
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...e task which according to me fall in the category of low priority are: watching a...
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... with proper plan because these are not those kind of task which demands one's full a...
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... which demands one's full attention in context of me, besides their may be p...
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...e activities and who need a lot of focus . As I have provided enough reasons a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'for example', 'in general', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228028503563 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.154394299287 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.083135391924 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0403800475059 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0641330166271 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109263657957 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0427553444181 0.0351676179071 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15696877042 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190023752969 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104513064133 0.0887237588012 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0118764845606 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0261282660333 0.0139019557991 188% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2183.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99725274725 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335164835165 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282967032967 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18956043956 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131868131868 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15696877042 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.0150532392 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1578947368 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.215619446 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.894736842 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 47.4545980335 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.46788990826 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223326897366 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0967104337078 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0639360663068 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50750223635 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157742824001 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788361720269 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114035683992 0.0781384742642 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240166760435 0.336927656856 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0942487758966 0.067059652881 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155623874548 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135258226212 0.0618886996521 219% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.