Some people believe that a vegetarian diet is the best diet for a variety of reasons, but others strongly oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Being a vegetarian has always been a controversial issue. Some people believe that excluding any kind of meat from diet improves health. Besides, vegetarianism makes our world a better place to live by preserving animal rights.
In my opinion, avoiding meat has some drawbacks as well as advantages. It is undeniable that eating too much meat, especially red meat is harmful to our body. In fact a diet which includes high amount of meat causes many chronic diseases such as high cholesterol.
Furthermore, consuming fruits and vegetables are extremely beneficial. Also with low level of fat there is no need to worry about gaining weight, heart attacks and …. Plus it is worth mentioning that according to scientific researches human body needs some essential proteins which can only be obtained from meat. This explains why many vegetarians suffer from lack of protein and some nutrients. Hence, vegetarianism is not approved scientifically unless in special situations.
In conclusion having a moderate diet is the best idea. Therefor we should pay more attention to our daily food in case not to overeat nor consume insufficient meat. Thus by having a balanced diet we can benefit the merits of a healthy body as well as conserving the earth’s limited resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nd vegetables are extremely beneficial. Also with low level of fat there is no need ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... overeat nor consume insufficient meat. Thus by having a balanced diet we can benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17874396135 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94140621507 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705314009662 0.524837075471 134% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3382223174 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5714285714 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153905433919 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535808110673 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537083250042 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911246322514 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356246055997 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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