Some people enjoy going to parties and meeting new people while others prefer to stay at home and relax Which do you prefer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people enjoy going to parties and meeting new people, while others prefer to stay at home
and relax. Which do you prefer?

Although some may believe that spending free time in a calm way is more relaxing, I presonally prefere to be more active and enjoy my free time out with a group of friends. My choice is based on personal and social grounds, and in the subsequent paragraphs, I will support my major reasons with example.

First of all, every human being is different and it is necessary for everyone to find what type of relax they prefere and what bring them more benefits. Some enjoy alone time with a book and a cup of tea, others prefer loud music, dancing, and company. Aditionally, there are some individuals which believe that the combination of both presented options is the best.. My personal experiance demonstrates that I'm a type of person for which it is more enjoyable to spend my time out. The pandemic stopped our lives for several months, it was very important to isolate and to avoid meeting big groups of people. For me, this was extremely hard and it affected me in negative way, it increased feelings of depression and anxiety. After the restrictions were lifted, I started to go out for parties and dinners again and because of that my mental health improved. If this had not happened to me, it is possible that I would have a different attitude towards this topic.

From a social prespective, bonding with people, new ones or ones you already know brings a lot of advantages to your life. Moreover, humans are social beings, and it is important for us to maintain meaningful and fulfilling relationships with our friends and family, hence, if you spend a considerable time home alone, you struggle to keep in touch with your loved ones. Furthermore, meeting new people can help you open new possibilities in your life. Imagine a situation, you are at the party and you meet this random person. You sit next to her and ask her one simple question: Tell me something about yourself. And after some time you talk, you tell her about the trip you were planning and about the restaurant you would like to visit during your trip, but the waiting list is very long. And she looks and you and says that she knows the owner of the restaurand and she will give him a call. Thus, if you had not gone to the party, you would not meet this person, and therefore, you would have not had benefit from it.

In this essay, I discussed my belief that going out is the better choice. I feel this way not just because of my experience but also because meeting new people can be very beneficial.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a calm way" with adverb for "calm"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ome may believe that spending free time in a calm way is more relaxing, I presonally prefere ...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...on of both presented options is the best.. My personal experiance demonstrates tha...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y personal experiance demonstrates that Im a type of person for which it is more e...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i feel, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58071748879 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50479742393 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526905829596 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6500630517 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.15 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248720344422 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710078823191 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586076796683 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124192069341 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452119446785 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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