Some people learn by doing things, other, people learn by reading about things, others learn by listening to people talk about things, which of these method of learning is best for you? Use specific examples to support your choice.
Nowadays people learn things in different ways. It is very common for people to learn by reading about something because the Internet provides a huge range of materials on different topics that can teach human-beings to do whatever they need or want.But,as for me it is better to learn by doing things.And i can support my point of view by providing several reasons listed below.
Initially,i believe that practice makes perfect.From my point of view, a person can become a real master of something after the years of practice. For sure,theory can be extremely helpful,but with no practice a person can be all fingers and thumbs.For example, a small child learn hor to walk not by listening to mother's stories, but by trying to walk on their own.
And finally,I reckon that practice is even more interesting and can be easier to learn how to do something.The majority of people speculate that practice can truly make the process of learning more pleasurable and interesting.From my own experience, practice can make a person mose purposeful and this person wull try to get better of his o her competitor.So, practice somehow gives birth to leaders.And as for me, I have read multitude stories about dancing styles and hoe to dance each of them.But, after a while i started to dance on my own and i have been obsessed with that. It have been my calling and i succeed in that.
To wrap everything up,despite the fact that practice makes perfect ,i guess that both practice and theory are interdependent.So, to succeed something a person need to read about that and after that have to practice non stop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, while, as for, for example, i guess, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83272727273 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91963090614 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.768710177 48.9658058833 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.857142857 100.406767564 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2857142857 20.6045352989 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202085873187 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105540021681 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10032403766 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132538435928 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111815371937 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.