Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Investigating the origin of people tendency to have a meal at restaurants or prepare and eat it at home, strongly depends on how a logical judgment about their life standards can be made on the one hand and how their psychological characteristics have been formed from the beginning of their life on the other hand. The life standards and how people live in different countries rely on their education, social behaviors, health, security and beyond those, economic conditions. The monetary policy of families, in most cases, is a decisive factor to order and have a food at restaurants or prepare it at home. The psychological characteristics is another aspect requiring an exact consideration to respond the essay question. This matter highly depends on the old traditions of people and can be regarded as a minor factor compared to the life standards. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, albeit a brief introduction, based on the quoted factors, my analytical reasons and expanded examples will be presented.
First and foremost, economy unquestionably is a fundamental factor for all people whether they can afford to have food at restaurants or not. Needless to say, in societies which ordering food is a luxurious thing, it is remarkably to the benefit of the people to expend some of their time preparing food at home. The most Scandinavian countries can be quoted as good examples selling expensive foods. In these countries, the price of food is significantly higher than other ones because of the cost of raw materials. If I live in these kinds of countries, I intend to prepare food at home. Although, I cannot help my tendency to change it sometimes and going to restaurants, most of the times, I should regard the importance of saving for my future life and impose myself to prepare a food at home.
In addition to economy, the health and security are other decisive factors to provide a situation for people to have their food at restaurants. Considering the present conditions of the world, fighting against corona virus breakout, the tendency to eat food in a restaurant has exceedingly decreased. This issue is so crucial in some countries that all food stands have been closed and people obliged to keep themselves in quarantines and prepare their food. As a result, the health is vital factor to make a decision about having food at home or at food stands. In addition, in countries engaged terrorist attacks such as Syria, Iraq and Afghanistan, it is not a logical matter to go to the restaurants. Under no circumstances, the value of life can be substituted to the taste of having a food at restaurants when it comes to the security of the restaurant. Therefore, it is crystal clear to survive myself instead of having a fun at a restaurant.
Aside from the above points, time limitation, is another important factor persuading people whom are so preoccupied with their jobs to order food from restaurants. Buying appropriate ingredients and knowing how to mix and refine them perfectly well as a scrumptious food, require consuming a huge amount of energy and time. Students, governments employees, teachers, etc more often than not prefer to prepare food and eat it at home only during their leisure time.
To recapitulate, the life’s standard factors including economy, health, security and time are the decisive factors to oblige people to have a food at restaurants or prepare homemade one. Although, the psychological characteristics of people push them to change their habit sometimes, in my opinion, the life’s standards is the most prominent factor to this matter. As far as I was student, I did not have sufficient time to assign food preparation. When I have employed in a governmental institute, I also prefered to order food from restaurants but when we get together, all of us prefer to prepare a food at home as an old tradition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...t together, all of us prefer to prepare a food at home as an old tradition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 104.0 52.1666666667 199% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3237.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 650.0 407.700716846 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04926703274 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02698279679 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450769230769 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1034.1 618.680645161 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6875462884 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80769230769 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374910955533 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114771263755 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820948142841 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238886812351 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376175500119 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 86.8835125448 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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