Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other prefer to eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers
Food is one of the main concerns on our day to day. People usually has to decide whether to prepare their own food or to go to a restaurant. There are many reasons why a person could choose one or the other. In the next paragraphs I will go deeper in some of these reasons before stating my preference.
First of all, people may or may not know how to cook or may not like doing it. Then, there are many places, like food stands, where people could get their meals for decent prices. For example, I remember a friend of mine who is not very proficient at cooking. He manages to have cereal or a sandwich for breakfast and dinner, but he usually buys his main meals prepared. He is actually an expert on where to get the best food at the lower price.
The second aspect a person should keep in mind is the hygienic aspect. The reality is that when eating outside, you can never be certain of how your food is prepared and what has gone into it. Surely, a good restaurant should offer some guarantees over the precedence and quality of its ingredients. As well as the way they prepare it, but still, people can make mistakes. For example, I have an uncle who owns a restaurant. They sell good quality meals; well prepared and made with fresh ingredients. Nevertheless, the truth is that no matter how much he supervises and directs his cookers, there is always a time when the cooker forgets to wash his hands after going to the toilet.
The last reason why a person chooses between restaurant and homemade food is the practicality. When going to a restaurant, the person does not have to think about going to the supermarket to buy the food, finding the time to prepare it, knowing how to prepare it and cleaning all the mess. Truly, going to a restaurant is much more practical than preparing the food, as a person only has to worry about getting to the establishment, choosing the food and paying for it.
In conclusion, there are many positive aspects in both going to a restaurant and buying and preparing your own food. It all depends on the preferences of each person. My preference is knowing how my food is prepared and what exactly is on it. Also, I know how to cook, enjoy doing it and have the time to do it. For all these reasons I rather make my own food than going to a restaurant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41549295775 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46294252341 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474178403756 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0746925416 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.375 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70833333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192731723875 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581148298655 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422966450306 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111958326576 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388356500767 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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