Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in?
Everyone has different dreams when it comes to where they wish to live. Some people choose to live in a small town, while others find living in a large city desirable. Personally, I would prefer to live in a big city due to larger job market and also more various facilities. In the following essay, I will discuss the matter in further details.
First and foremost, city life offers numerous job opportunities. Large companies, multinational corporations, and government offices are mostly located in big cities; as a result it is more likely to find a job and make advancement in career in the metropolises, especially for certain professions. For example, my friend graduated from pharmacy school 2 years ago. Failing to find job as a pharmacist in a small town, he migrated to a big city to search for his dream job. He managed to be hired in a well-known pharmaceutical company and now he is a successful pharmacist.
Secondly, I believe that large cities provide people with cultural experiences which they can enjoy and appreciate. Most metropolises have a lot of museums, ethnic restaurants, libraries, art exhibitions, and other cosmopolitan facilities. My city is no exception. For instance, my colleagues and I spend every Friday evening visiting a new ethnic restaurant for dinner. Over the past three months we have tasted food from dozens of different national cuisines. Also my sister and I visit a different museum every month and enjoy learning about history and cultural heritage. If I lived in a small town, I would not have the opportunity to have these intellectual and cultural experiences.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that living in a big city is more preferable than living in a small town. This is because cities are better place to find a proper job, besides you can enjoy visiting various cultural centers in your free time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93949044586 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99823639454 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582802547771 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0517965502 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294597051797 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883124134542 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13327218542 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210683375552 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151388632832 0.0645574589148 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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