There is a bone of contention for this prompt, some believe that it is crucial to foster good morals and ethics in individuals, while other greedy people think that it is imperative to work of themselves. In my opinion, it is indeed necessary to make good citizens and workers for the following reasons:
To begin with, in today’s materialistic and complex world, people care least about ethics and run behind wealth. In fact, many people adopt anti-social strategies to accumulate fortune. In order to avoid this, it is prudent for school to teach difference between right and wrong pathways. Moreover, children who learn these qualities at early developing age, can certainly create camaraderie at work place in future and involve in altruistic activities. For instance, when teacher teaches stories and histories of great leaders and benevolent people such as Gandhiji and Mother Teresa, students might learn that consequences of good deeds are positive and indelible. Their contribution to save mankind from slavery and helping poor and people in times of calamities is irreplaceable . As a result, progression of a country in economic and social perspective lies in the hands of the future offspring.
However, it is indeed true that to be successful in this competitive and interrelated world it is important to think for us. For instance, if schools only concentrates for high level philosophical theories to grow inner mind and peace, students might consider this as boring. Moreover, they need interesting topics to bind their attention. Therefore, it is crucial to teach methods for benefitting them as individuals such as unique skill or trait. Computer skill serves a compelling example, being software-programming expert a person can be reputed worker and maintain work atmosphere by his decent qualities. Thus, teaching both in equal proportion is conducive for prosperity of a country as well as for individual.
To sum up, it is imperative to inculcate moral values and ethics to be better citizen and help others in time of emergency. In addition, attending school
Can bring tremendous benefits for personal development required for ganing highly reputed employment option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36311239193 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05284819223 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625360230548 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9164154291 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3125 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1875 5.45110844103 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155857262389 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047453058059 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391303835561 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838614691098 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438719235782 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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