Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The better situation according to me is for the young adults to get independence from their parents as soon as possible. This independence can be described as staying away in a hostel for completing the remaining education or leaving the house to do something of one's own wish or pursue a career which requires to go somewhere else.
There are many advantages of staying away from the parents, one such adavantage is the students can develop the ability to make their own decisions. This is definitely going to be useful in their future life. Even if some of the decisions go wrong or have bad results, one learns from their mistakes. But to learn from such mistakes, one has to take some decision and that will happen only when you are in situation to take a decision on your own. For example, when we want to make a decision on whether to join the coaching classes for a particular subject or not, the student will have the freedom to decide and will not be forced by anyone else.
Further, the young adults could explore the world on their own and meet new people, interact with them. This will help in learning of many new things. This will make the person more audacious and fearless by facing the real world alone and dealing with the difficulties that come in the way. For example, when you travel from one place to another you need money. The person will realise the importance of money and the hardships that his parents had to face for earning the same money. This will definitely chnage the way he/she looks at the world and start spending money only when required.
So there are many positive points if young adults are given freedom from their parents. Of course the young should have developed the rational thinking skills. On the other hand, the one who stays with his parents will never explore the world and learn new things and will mostly live the same life as his/her parents did.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
... wish or pursue a career which requires to go somewhere else. There are many advan...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...be useful in their future life. Even if some of the decisions go wrong or have bad results,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'of course', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194520547945 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.175342465753 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931506849315 0.0866891130778 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0493150684932 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041095890411 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112328767123 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0438356164384 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.28466377861 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0383561643836 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117808219178 0.0887237588012 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0356164383562 0.0209618222197 170% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191780821918 0.0139019557991 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1906.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60588235294 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288235294118 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208823529412 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135294117647 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0794117647059 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28466377861 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.0193580006 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.25 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5911405205 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 42.1323529412 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.31958762887 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254717632821 0.300154397459 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116690177131 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0740008010385 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53785934526 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178676096071 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117765558834 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910777027439 0.0781384742642 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443664676231 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0348038865192 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202583739659 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791889332486 0.0618886996521 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.