Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live withe their family for a longer time.which of these do you think is better?use specific reasons and examples to support opinion.
No one can deny the fact that independence of any person make them more responsible, experienced about different things, and eventually helps in intensifying their ability. It is my firm belief that explore adventurous task and enhance the growth in the life people should be independent as early as possible. If I would ask about this, I would definitely opt for independence from parents. I will develop my reasons in subsequent paragraph.
First, the chief reason of the agreement of statement is that the experience inculcate people to many risky and creative things which solely possible by independence of yourself. When you are independent from their parents, you would learns by own selves. You will try to figure out every possible ways to learn and what is good or bad about your future. As it will advocate, you will get exposure from the world. For example, we all know about the Mahatama Gandhi, who had played indispensable role for independence of India. He left his family at early age to educated themselves, and after graduation he took part in various marches to make India as independent.
Secondly, as independence gives the opportunity to take decision by own, people get advantages of this, which accelerate their performance in later. For example, when I was in college, I had a friend, who were not lived with their family just to learn different aspects of life, and his personality and college's grades report was far better than others and he had got highest paid job in Multinational company at campus placement due to his capability to work in variety of environment.
However, when young adults leave their family at early age, then they might suffer from heinous problems such as crime, robbery, anxiety, loneliness, etc. Whereby these problems, sometime teenager do suicide to get rid of these problems. Hence, it’s necessary to live with family to distract their selves from issues. Nevertheless, despite these disadvantages, I still believe that the advantages are much more.
In sum up, for all of the points exposes above, the pros of the independence of the young adults overweight the drawbacks. Independence of children provides widen horizon of the different people and countries which leads to improve their career and caliber.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifferent things, and eventually helps in intensifying their ability. It is my fir...
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Suggestion: learn
...dependent from their parents, you would learns by own selves. You will try to figure o...
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...rime, robbery, anxiety, loneliness, etc. Whereby these problems, sometime teenag...
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...oneliness, etc. Whereby these problems, sometime teenager do suicide to get rid ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...vantages are much more. In sum up, for all of the points exposes above, the pros of the i...
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...ds to improve their career and caliber.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12064343164 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85613272173 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605898123324 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2319119698 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297197292053 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832680415287 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506454488316 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157064504305 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457700552541 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifferent things, and eventually helps in intensifying their ability. It is my fir...
^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...dependent from their parents, you would learns by own selves. You will try to figure o...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rime, robbery, anxiety, loneliness, etc. Whereby these problems, sometime teenag...
^^
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oneliness, etc. Whereby these problems, sometime teenager do suicide to get rid ...
^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...vantages are much more. In sum up, for all of the points exposes above, the pros of the i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds to improve their career and caliber.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12064343164 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85613272173 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605898123324 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2319119698 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297197292053 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832680415287 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506454488316 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157064504305 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457700552541 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.