Students are more influence by their teachers than their friends.
Nowadays, education becomes integral to everyone's life. Owing to get knowledge, students spend much of their time with teachers. Hence, no can deny the fact that teachers play an indispensable role in students' life to shape their future. I firmly believe that children are more affected by teachers' behavior. Here, I will develop my reasons in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, the children start their studies from an early age and go to school every day. Thereby, they more interact with faculty for solving their doubts, taking guidelines or learning lessons . As a result, students highly affected by the behavior of professors. For instance, when I was in school, I liked my mathematics professor because he had a profound knowledge of a particular subject. Also, he was very disciplined and used to apply the funniest methods to inculcate us. Hence, every student wants to become as though him. This clearly depicts that when you give more time to some people , you will tend to imitate their actions, behavior, and good qualities.
Secondly, a teacher plays a vital role in everyone's life because they do not educate only for enhancing their career growth but also they provide life long lessons on how to get rid of difficult situations. As per Indian history, some decades ago, children had to go to “Gurukul(Kind of school)” to learn skills like how to use weapons during wartime. For example, we all aware of a famous war “MAHABHARAT” , which was fought in India. In that, a teacher name Dronacharya , gave training to every warrior to succeed. But nowadays in the modern era, due to the advent of technology, students can take online classes from anywhere. This indicates that students can take help to solve their problems.
However, some people believe that friends can affect more the young adult mind. In the era of the21st century, students get entice with the social media platform whereby they able to make more friends. Therefore, they can capable of share their thought, beliefs, interests, happy or bad moments with others. Consequently, students can take the help of any friend across the globe which affects them emotionally. Nevertheless, despite these advantages, I still believe that a teacher can affect more positively to change a person’s life.
To sum up, it can be said that a teacher can influence more on a young mind because students consider teachers as their ideal in life, even sometimes they obey every suggestion of their professor. It eventually leads them in the right direction to thrive efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, even so, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08530805687 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73131724571 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597156398104 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.718126844 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.84 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.88 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.5376344086 686% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360557489183 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910751485471 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837014001082 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226094540904 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590870538411 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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