Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in universities dormitories or they may choose to live in apartments in community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community.
Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in universities dormitories or they may choose to live in apartments in community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community.
These days, most men and women would like to go to college or university and they have to choose a place to live. While some students prefer to stay in dormitories and have very convincing reasons for what they do, other students rent an apartment in community. From my point of view, each option has its own advantages and disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, people who live in dormitories have to share their rooms with other students. Sometimes, they are their classmates so they can do their assignments together and benefit from their knowledge. They usually have same interests or concerns and can discuss about various issues without any conflict. In addition, living in dormitories helps them save money because dorm rooms are cheaper than apartments in community. However, there are some disadvantages like less personal freedom. For example, some students cannot study at midnight but their roommates have part-time jobs and the only available time for them to study is midnight.
Secondly, people who live in off-campus apartments have to take bus or taxi to arrive at university but they have more personal freedom. They can prepare their favorite meals, study and sleep whenever they want. Furthermore, they will participate in social events like concerts or exhibitions because they have better access to them and live in community.
Last but not least, living in off-campus apartments makes students independent. They have to arrange their time for cooking, buying ingredients and washing clothes because they cannot use various facilities that are available in dormitories.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that living in a dorm room has some benefits like low expenses and getting in touch with classmates. On the other hand, living in the apartment in community has some advantages such as more personal freedom and experiencing various events.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23561643836 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84667422403 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512328767123 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7733123135 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.55 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.569468622661 0.236089414692 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197202357034 0.076458572812 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200525375054 0.0737576698707 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348397275034 0.150856017488 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.283855637845 0.0645574589148 440% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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