Teachers are not value as they were in the past, do you agree or disagree.

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Teachers are not value as they were in the past, do you agree or disagree.

Submitted by may82 on Fri, 06/17/2016 - 11:33

In the past teachers play an essential role in children's and people's lives. Some people believe, they are still necessary to educate their kid ethics plus knowledge. In contrary, some people disagree. As far as I am concerned, in my opinion, our technological improvement distorts several instrumental values in our population one of them is teacher's fundamental's role; therefore, I do not think educators needed anymore for person's life. Perhaps, the internet availability, homeschools, and thousands of regulations against teachers are few reasons to explain why tutor's role noticeably declined.

First of all, in the last century schools were the only educational resources in the community. Families were obsessive to register there in kids in the school and be sure they had their knowledge because books and printed resources were unavailable and very expensive.However, the internet invitation creates a global change in all fields of the society. A good example for this is, my neighbors, they depend completely on the educational websites for obtaining their e-book and purchase printed book resources also depend on online courses for teaching their kids on their own. No necessary to waste their times at school. The magical teaching secrets are available on the internet.

Second, people prefer to teach their kids at home and keep their eyes on them to protect them all the time. Some people are afraid of the negative social interaction of their children with their peers which in few cases puts their kids endanger of gangs, drugs, and liquores. In fact, in the name of safety they prefer to teach them at homeschool. For example, my cousin lives in downtown Detroit, which is city number one in violence.Unfortunately, he can not transfer his sons to another school. So, he decides to en-role them with homeschool and put a lot of effort to educate them to protect them from their inclement neighborhood.

Least but not the last, undoubtedly, teacher's responsibilities treat all learners with respect and fairness. Also, deal with them equally regardless their age, color, ethnicity, race, and religions. Although there is inevitably a subjective element in the witness or experience of inappropriate behavior from the teachers such as unwanted physical contact such as slapping, hitting, pushing or even sexual harassment. Which in turn create a critical relationship between the teacher and his students. These days, teachers are not free enough to teach their kids freely as they were before. Now after several inappropriate recorded cases, tutors can not put their jobs endanger or their future care behind the jail. In facts, many regulations control this honest relationship. For example, one of last week news report about Ms, Lucy; a biological teacher at an intermediate school, she lost her career after she used the word Vagina while describing one of Roman statues of in front of her students. This thing is unfair, but it is a good example how this job lost its value among our society.

All in all, I agree with that, the internet, homeschool and several obligations against the teachers in our generation are behind declining their teaching values.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...t, which is city number one in violence.Unfortunately, he can not transfer his sons to anothe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276816608997 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.108996539792 0.158761421928 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0813148788927 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0484429065744 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0865051903114 0.0685040099705 126% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128027681661 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0121107266436 0.0351676179071 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.94244099081 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207612456747 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0813148788927 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00346020761246 0.0209618222197 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00692041522491 0.0139019557991 50% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3180.0 2387.08602151 133% => OK
No of words: 512.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2109375 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384765625 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302734375 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212890625 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13671875 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94244099081 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 69.1054432282 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.48 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.390522951 48.84282405 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.48 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 50.7534375 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.70921985816 1.45489161554 117% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316998333084 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0725061133854 0.103427244359 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0698873078039 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440844762877 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179694939456 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104136905336 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727783757932 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309350421368 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.04860384917 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20507170328 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645114696701 0.0618886996521 104% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK

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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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why tutor's role noticeably declined.
why tutor's roles are noticeably declined.

Sentence: As far as I am concerned, in my opinion, our technological improvement distorts several instrumental values in our population one of them is teacher's fundamental's role; therefore, I do not think educators needed anymore for person's life.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to fundamental's and role

Sentence: Some people are afraid of the negative social interaction of their children with their peers which in few cases puts their kids endanger of gangs, drugs, and liquores.
Error: liquores Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: In fact, in the name of safety they prefer to teach them at homeschool.
Error: homeschool Suggestion: No alternate word

flaws:
No. of Words: 514 350 //Write the essay in 30 minutes. examples could be shorter.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2603 1500
No. of Different Words: 282 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.064 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.734 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 193 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 151 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 103 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.56 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.214 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.56 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.25 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.449 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5