telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship
Many people believe Honesty is the Best Policy. Speaking truth might always clear your mind, but it may have an adverse effect on the recipient. Thus. truth can be good and bad both. So. I disagree that telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. for two reasons.
First. Sometimes the truth can be harsh, and that might affect the listener mentally. People might go in a state of shock and trauma due to this. Sometimes, the best thing to do is to tell white lies. White lies are molded truth, which might consist a part of the truth but told in such a way that it might not hurt the listener. For example, when I was young, I once failed in maths examination but I told my father a white lie that I scored low due to deteriorating health. If I would have told him that I failed. being a math professor, he would have taken all the blame on him. and this would hurt him his whole life. But this half-truth saved him from that and saved our relation too.
Second. a healthy relationship depends upon various factors. Speaking truth can be considered one of them. but is not always the best way. Studies and newspaper have shown that speaking truth has broken a lot of marriages and have left all the kids without their both parents. For instance, a few days back a newspaper reported that a couple got divorced because of the women’s claim of men cheating on her. The men stated the truth to be guilt free with her and bring peace to mind. The men mentioned the mistake was done in the influence of alcohol and pleaded guilty. But still, the harsh truth cost them their marriage and to the kids their parents.
Thus the above two examples clearly portray that real truth might not always be the best solution in relationships and white lies have proven to be more effective. Though, telling lies is terrible and should be avoided whenever possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, still, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56470588235 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40514874476 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561764705882 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1150147002 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6666666667 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95833333333 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249557905808 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718797557517 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155962306801 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171499630321 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13226905192 0.0645574589148 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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