In today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
In general, the statement is one of the major considerations of people in my society including me. Groups of persons may hold the view that working immediately and risk taking is better. I, however, after thinking about direction, decided to stand up in contrast with this idea. I guess providing the following reasons to support my perspective is crucial.
The first important factor which comes to mind is that in this manner people may learn better and more. Since persons spend a lot of time in order to do their works, they may face with many challenges and solve them. Hence, by these words, such a person be able to understand all difficulties in his attended work. I think that a small example can give some light. Imagine a girl who spends 3 hours in order to do her homework. It would seem to me that this child may learn a lot of beneficial thing which prevent her from making extra mistakes in the future.
Another significant factor involved in this issue is that in this path men and women can obtain their desired goal easily. It is significantly clear that when boys or girls do their works slowly, they do not make mistakes. Therefore, they would be satisfied from what they do and get good results. I guess there is not example better than my friend who does every work well organized without stress. Moreover, he always may reach his purpose and happy.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by some one who argues that nowadays, human should work quickly. In these groups view, a person can save more time, if do every work fast. In contrast, still I confirm that by doing everything correctly, a boy or girl may make extra time during life. For example, I have a lot of friends around me who do their works charily and spend time just once. In other words, they save time by preventing mistakes, moreover, they do not again and again just one work.
In sum, from above discussed points, reaching the conclusion that people should work slowly and correctly, is marked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...is that in this manner people may learn better and more. Since persons spend a lot of ...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...tedly, there are some justifications by some one who argues that nowadays, human should ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'i guess', 'i think', 'in contrast', 'in general', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207070707071 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.161616161616 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0580808080808 0.0866891130778 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0732323232323 0.046263068375 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0757575757576 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121212121212 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.0351676179071 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47028929938 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0176767676768 0.0309702414327 57% => OK
Particles: 0.00252525252525 0.00188951952338 134% => OK
Determiners: 0.0732323232323 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328282828283 0.0209618222197 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020202020202 0.0139019557991 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2001.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 352.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68465909091 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284090909091 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198863636364 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127840909091 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.09375 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47028929938 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573863636364 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 64.7969152551 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7619047619 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6682887933 48.84282405 44% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 36.6482683983 45.7405998639 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.15447154472 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373517569007 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0610655907431 0.103427244359 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0542867703916 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46098193219 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156794530385 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112710929229 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539938147138 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248745459367 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0669515496027 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222829717131 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378993430675 0.0618886996521 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.