Is this world full of scholars? How will it be sound if all are engineers and scientists without any players and stars? I am supporting that Universities and colleges should give equal support to sports and social activities as library and classes. This earth is mixture of artists, scholars, scientists and players. All human being understand its capability and interest in particular field during teenage and at university level.
Not only engineers and scholars are making the developed nation, the name of the nation is also driven by the artists and players. There will not be a campus if we will exclude sports and social activities, a building can comprise all the libraries and classes. Universities and colleges have to support equally to the sport and social activity then only nation will generate famous personalities like Sachin, Dravid and Rahman. Sports and social activities maintain the health and create relaxation from the burden of the study. Many students use to get number of friend while participating in these activities. There is proven fact a perfect man needs to be mentally and physically fit. These exercises build the mental strength of the students. Many big universities are organising cultural, sports fest along with technical fest. These events use to find the additional talent of the individual.
If there is a pros then there will a cons, so there are some disadvantages in promoting these activities too much. Students use to spend more time in playing and social activities and they forget about the main agenda of a student. There should be proper balance between study and these activities. If they are talented in those fields then they have to come out from the burden in terms of study.
Universities and colleges should promote social and sports activities along with educational platform. These activities will help in obtaining quality knowledge. History shows that all the scholars had some other interest along with dedication towards the study. It depends completely on the student how he/she will take advantage of these additional activities in the colleges and universities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the burden of the study. Many students use to get number of friend while participa...
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...along with technical fest. These events use to find the additional talent of the in...
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...dditional talent of the individual. If there is a pros then there will a cons, so there are so...
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...al. If there is a pros then there will a cons, so there are some disadvantages in pro...
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...ing these activities too much. Students use to spend more time in playing and socia...
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...nce between study and these activities. If they are talented in those fields then ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'in particular']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27345844504 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.139410187668 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0804289544236 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0375335120643 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0214477211796 0.0685040099705 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117962466488 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.029490616622 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75281335024 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0214477211796 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00268096514745 0.00188951952338 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.107238605898 0.0887237588012 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.029490616622 0.0209618222197 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00536193029491 0.0139019557991 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2133.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 344.0 408.028673835 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.20058139535 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401162790698 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279069767442 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212209302326 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142441860465 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75281335024 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.3901711048 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6363636364 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2830651518 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9545454545 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.644075263715 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 43.5433403805 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.12162162162 1.45489161554 146% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391681848102 0.300154397459 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0533945878321 0.103427244359 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.050525286055 0.0752933317313 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474341595696 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132206104504 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147179941871 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1200898281 0.0781384742642 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.356162624484 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0538751383167 0.067059652881 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279100809554 0.210909579961 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781519298164 0.0618886996521 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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