TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

One famous statement that "Truth is bitter in nature", with the meaning of this statement people use to hide real truth to avoid the taste of bitterness. Agreeing with the statement that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Bitterness will be tolerable in compare to the consequence of the supported lie. We should not forget about the fact that nothing can be hidden for the longer time. It is better to face the truth ahead of the lie.
First lesson teach by parents to the child is to speak truth because they know a lie can ruin the life of the child. Great and famous people has also given many quotes on the truth. A man can not feel relaxed if he is hiding something in his mind. Tension, fear will always create disturbances in the mind. The feel will be more comfortable if you are emitting out the reality in front of everyone. Trust and truth will always make the relationship stronger and longer. It is always better to confess the guilt and tell the reality instead of cheat. Hiding the reality with your lover will lead to breakup or loosing of the person. Truth always create the path of reconstruction. People hides truth in the sake of fear of someone but that person will understand you if you will bring reality. Employees prefer circulated and ambiguous answers instead of truth to avoid the bitter consequence from the boss but small lie can take big shape and create opposite outcome. No one is perfect in the world, mistake can happen but intentionally converting small mistake into disastrous shape will lead to destruction. Example like engineer does a mistake in analysis while creating the design of the building. He hides that mistake and his design has been considered for the project. Imagine the consequences of the design, it can lead life of so many people. Similarly effect of the small lie will affect your life as well as the life of others.
It has been said also that sometimes lie is better than real truth. Some people cant bear the reality and ruin themselves with that truth. People should speak truth but speaking time is also important. People should wait for the perfect time so that impact of the reality will be constructive. It is difficult to sustain in today's world with the support of truth.
It is always a good habit to speak truth and telling truth is always being considered. Real truth creates transparency in the relationship which will lead to attain the benefits of trust among the people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion:
... breakup or loosing of the person. Truth always create the path of reconstruction...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... is better than real truth. Some people cant bear the reality and ruin themselves wi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256302521008 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.161764705882 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504201680672 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378151260504 0.0685040099705 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128151260504 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54487978642 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273109243697 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00210084033613 0.00188951952338 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.111344537815 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0420168067227 0.0209618222197 200% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00210084033613 0.0139019557991 15% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2515.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 438.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74200913242 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321917808219 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2100456621 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12100456621 0.174417080927 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0913242009132 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54487978642 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461187214612 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.7784998881 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6428571429 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2439994239 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8214285714 120.699889404 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.321428571429 0.644075263715 50% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 36.6474233529 45.7405998639 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.68067226891 1.45489161554 116% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435051503396 0.300154397459 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117865801395 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069592224088 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502933163251 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115766268269 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181792404003 0.114077575197 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910042110768 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.502334260411 0.336927656856 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.090331151683 0.067059652881 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342144568317 0.210909579961 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584126293332 0.0618886996521 94% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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