Do you think that number of cars will reduce in the upcoming years? It is evident that rate of increment in the cars are shooting up day by day. Government of the nations are worrying about the traffic and pollution in the country. How can we say that there will be fewer cars in twenty years? Contrary to the statement, my opinion says that number of car counts are increasing everyday exponentially, there will not be chance of fewer cars than today. We can say that rate of increment will come to a stagnant state or can dip if government or regional transport department imply some strict rules and regulations on the purchase of the cars.
There are many aspects of buying cars among the common public and finally it comes to a important things "money". No one will bother about rules, if you have abundance of money you will buy cars. Having cars or private vehicles is the trend in the current scenario. For maintaining the status of the life, people are preferring private vehicles in compare to the own house. Automobiles sectors are launching super models and attractive cars everyday to deviate the mind of the common man. They are releasing every segments of cars from low to high price which is making easy for the person to buy any with respect to the budget. Everyone wants to live luxurious life and car is one of the part of being luxurious. Some families are having more number of cars in compare to the number of peoples. Do you think that this tradition will decrease in the coming years. Today's drastic variation in the climate and dusty atmosphere are forcing people to have their own car. Theft, molestation, teasing are some incidents happening in the public transports which lead to concern about the safety. Man become so smart and rich that they have every solution to break the rules or implement in different way. Odd-even rule has been implemented for some days in the capital city of India. What is the outcome of the rule? Instantly number of cars were less on the roads but people are planning to have cars with both numbers.
On the other hand, we can say that number of purchase may decrease because traffic is increasing day by day on the roads. Time is more precious in compare to everything, people start using public transport like metro, locals to reach the destination quickly in compare to hanging in the traffic. Governments are planning better public transport facilities in low cost to attract public to get benefit of it. If government will enforce strict and punishable rule to control purchase then it is obvious to follow public transport. Secondly people are also trying to locate close to the working place to avoid traffic and cost of travelling.
Finally it is unpredictable statement to say that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today. Seeing the today's scenario in the use of cars, it is quite difficult to judge but it is possible if the nations start working on it. They have to provide better public transport to assure safety and security.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...hat number of car counts are increasing everyday exponentially, there will not be chance...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e common public and finally it comes to a important things 'money'. No ...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...lic and finally it comes to a important things 'money'. No one will bother a...
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Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ntaining the status of the life, people are preferring private vehicles in compare to the own ...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...nching super models and attractive cars everyday to deviate the mind of the common man. ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... avoid traffic and cost of travelling. Finally it is unpredictable statement to say th...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ewer cars in use than today. Seeing the todays scenario in the use of cars, it is quit...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'with respect to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269565217391 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.173913043478 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0226086956522 0.046263068375 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0347826086957 0.0685040099705 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0486956521739 0.0351676179071 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52805124074 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0486956521739 0.0309702414327 157% => OK
Particles: 0.00173913043478 0.00188951952338 92% => OK
Determiners: 0.0869565217391 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.024347826087 0.0209618222197 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00695652173913 0.0139019557991 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3031.0 2387.08602151 127% => OK
No of words: 530.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71886792453 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339622641509 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22641509434 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150943396226 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0943396226415 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52805124074 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477358490566 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.2893528813 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 18.275862069 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.969070355 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.517241379 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.275862069 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.379310344828 0.644075263715 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 40.9173715029 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.93984962406 1.45489161554 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326528485321 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100928428666 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729326306755 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500300589882 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114869149553 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133129930501 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758200601647 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.521826034404 0.336927656856 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480712852818 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254154273808 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587163639742 0.0618886996521 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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