Technological advancement and global connectivity in the world today, has provided the easiness of doing any thing and the comfort we are enjoying in our daily life. Though we take all these as granted, scenario was far more harder during our grand parents' childhood.
First the advanced infrastructure has changed our life in many ways, one of them is mechanized transportation which has provided us the means of comfortable mobility along with the speed in our life. It has touched almost all aspects of our life starting from education to our working life. I used to go to my school with motor cycle driven by my father and now I avail office transport for my everyday works. Whereas my grandfather used to go to school on foot walking around 5 kilometers everyday and get back to home on the same route. During the monsoon this road used to become treacherous and more hard for him to attend the school. sometimes the school remain closed during heavy raining, However, now a days a rain merely interrupts our daily activity.
Secondly the instant availability of information via internet has improved our life greatly, which provided the way to get many stuffs done just sitting at home, considered impossible for our grandparents. Today you can open up bank accounts, book your tickets or do even shopping online. This way people can save time and enjoy their leisure. On the other hand during his childhood, our grand father waited for weekly fair day for regular shopping, More over he had to walk a long way to the Bazaar and bring stuffs on the back of a horse, which today we get done by just a click of a mouse. So this easiness of doing these things has given us more time which people are using today to advance the technology further ahead.
In conclusion, we always say "Old is gold", which may be true in some way for the presence of social interactions and tolerance in our grand parents' generation however it is undoubted that the comfortable life we are enjoying today is unparalleled to them. And we always should thank our previous generations to make these advancements possible with their heart and soul effort.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...day, has provided the easiness of doing any thing and the comfort we are enjoying in our ...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
... all these as granted, scenario was far more harder during our grand parents childhood. ...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ool on foot walking around 5 kilometers everyday and get back to home on the same route....
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Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
...more hard for him to attend the school. sometimes the school remain closed during heavy r...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...n closed during heavy raining, However, now a days a rain merely interrupts our daily acti...
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Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...osed during heavy raining, However, now a days a rain merely interrupts our daily acti...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'whereas', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246913580247 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.165432098765 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0864197530864 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0469135802469 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0913580246914 0.0685040099705 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108641975309 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0617283950617 0.0351676179071 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67081222029 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0345679012346 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.00246913580247 0.00188951952338 131% => OK
Determiners: 0.0814814814815 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00987654320988 0.0209618222197 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123456790123 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2153.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 371.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80323450135 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323450134771 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21832884097 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164420485175 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0970350404313 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67081222029 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576819407008 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 66.5271128852 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7333333333 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8396375509 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.533333333 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 46.5662174304 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.37398373984 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226921771637 0.300154397459 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103442796543 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0881074896618 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50421149412 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162115375326 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911568984557 0.114077575197 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363137594805 0.0781384742642 46% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295410410625 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0573382549483 0.067059652881 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155192861729 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152241860091 0.0618886996521 25% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.