In the growth of science and technology, man become a slave of scientific discoveries and inventions. Agreeing to the statement that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was the age of grandparents. Science has trapped human being completely in the period of half century. Easiness and comfort providing by the scientific invention has made the life of a man habitual to those things.
Lot of things have been changed in this period and it is pretty much sure that our children will be in more comfort zone in compare to today scenario. Our grandparents were not enjoying the comfortable life of being in air conditioned room and travelling in a luxurious car. Forget about the air conditioning room, it was difficult to get proper supply of power. It was usual for them to walk bare foot in the sun and working in the farms to earn money. Who can walk a mile without shoes now? Walking some miles once in a while with proper equipment is calling as marathon. There were no source of entertainment like internet, computers and play station. We can sit in a room and enjoy ourselves with these gadgets. What is easiness? This shows clearly that even for playing we are taking supports of gadgets so that no need to come out from a room. Observe the drastic change between us and them in the field of communication. People can call anyone in a second from cellphone but they had to walk for calling and talking.
It is obvious that time is changing which means everything will change. It is quite difficult to sustain in today's weather without these discoveries in compare to our grandparents age. Pollution and inventions have revolved the climatic cycle. It was pleasant weather to walk, play and work but we can't predict weather today. People are loosing their health day by day changes in the climate. They have to take support of these scientific inventions. They could also use if it was there in that time.
Finally it is a period of time which is regulating person's life. We have to adapt all the things which are coming in our way. Life today is easier and more comfortable with the inventions of scientific discoveries but it is very difficult to sustain life like our grandparents did in the current scenario.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t weather to walk, play and work but we cant predict weather today. People are loosi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...also use if it was there in that time. Finally it is a period of time which is regulat...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...as there in that time. Finally it is a period of time which is regulating persons life. We ha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251184834123 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.18009478673 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0687203791469 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0355450236967 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.063981042654 0.0685040099705 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135071090047 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0473933649289 0.0351676179071 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66707323167 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331753554502 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00236966824645 0.00188951952338 125% => OK
Determiners: 0.0876777251185 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142180094787 0.0209618222197 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118483412322 0.0139019557991 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2233.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 392.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69642857143 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311224489796 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239795918367 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150510204082 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112244897959 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66707323167 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515306122449 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.7134642782 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0769230769 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0376575307 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8846153846 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.269230769231 0.644075263715 42% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 39.0565149137 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.55084745763 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266874258973 0.300154397459 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0638654485287 0.103427244359 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0574377744352 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.421791953276 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161949404622 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960464562744 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799780440069 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.425552710858 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00967030548192 0.067059652881 14% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208912113677 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028154684699 0.0618886996521 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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