TPO 11- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the current century, the internet plays a pivotal role in the advancement and improvement of several fields of science and engineering. Besides, the internet has become a magic word for almost every requirement in our daily life. When it comes to positive or negative effects of using the internet, controversy surrounds the issue of whether people get valuable help or this excessive exposure to the internet may create several problems? I am of the opinion that the internet has many benefits which weigh its drawbacks and the following explanations will further elaborate on this matter.
One of the significant aspects of the ongoing topic which demands a keen contemplation is that the internet paves the way for rapid scientific research investigation. That is to say, in the past, people did not have easy access to the knowledge sources. In fact, they accumulate the knowledge by exchanging their textbooks, spending hours in the libraries, or even in some necessary cases, they may have gotten information by face to face communication. Meanwhile, the advent of the internet facilitates the way of getting the required data by e-books, online libraries, or search engines in less time. Thus, scholars, today can create and work better in comparison to the past by just sitting on their desks. Take my own experience for instance. I went to the high school in the 80's and there was no internet connection in our country. Thus, we had difficulty finding our questions or solving or problems by ourselves. But today my son checks his problems by using the internet without any problem.
Another noteworthy aspect of the topic which needs to be reflected is that the internet eases the lifestyle of the people. As a matter of fact, it provides a great connection for online purchasing and several shopping places. Thus, people do not need to spend their time by going to the markets or checking prices in stores to find the best price for their items. To illustrate, perhaps my cousin's experience will shed more light on this matter. He bought his car by just checking and paying online. He told me that online websites gave him a great chance to get rid of the stressful bargaining procedure and also he could evaluate different options and prices for the same car in the related sites. Owing to this positive feedback, he firmly suggested this type of purchasing to me.
Paradoxically, some people may spend their time to check the political and social occurrences and this habit may create an addiction in a long term. In essence, the sedentary lifestyle can lead to unpreventable causes of health diseases like anxiety, depression, and obesity. This happens mainly because of not having vigorous physical exercise to activate the body.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am pretty convinced that there are many tangible reasons to support the advantage of using the internet in our life. Because the internet can help scholars for a swift access to the required data and also it eases people's lifestyle in a good way. However, the excessive use of it can negatively affect the health of the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'swift access'.
Suggestion: swift access
...ause the internet can help scholars for a swift access to the required data and also it eases ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2611.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.963878327 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73840359617 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528517110266 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 827.1 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1879558679 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.423076923 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34615384615 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130262906583 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330078374599 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327277138794 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751497546658 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259610006361 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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