TPO 16- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, there is a high tendency among people to take advantage of getting help from skilled people for their requirements. In fact, they realize that it is not necessary to learn all the knowledge and this brings about several benefits to our lives. When it comes to traveling, controversy surrounds the issue of whether people should choose to guide by a tour guide or they go by themselves? I am of the opinion that we need travel guides knowledge and there are several advantages which weigh the drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
One of the remarkable aspects of the ongoing discussion which needs to be reflected is that traveling by tour guides can bring us convenience. As a matter of fact, travel agencies have educated all their tour guides with an abundant amount of information about the historical and geographical data about the places. Thus, they have deep understandings about the country you visit and can make you a great schedule of traveling. Moreover, getting help from the tour guide can make our time more efficient because they know how to deal with different problems and solve it in a less time. Take my last trip to Singapore for instance. I traveled with an intimate friend of mine to visit a whole environment of ancient Singapore, but we did not have enough information about the city rules, weather, and the reaction of the people towards foreigners. In the beginning, we were frightened because they were not hospitable. However, after talking to a tour guide, we perceived all their reactions and got a chance to see all the place well.
Another noticeable aspect of the topic which demands a keen contemplation is that tour guides can provide us safe travel. Since most of the tour agencies have their vehicles and regular contacts, they can guarantee our safety and needs. In essence, the people who are traveling always are not aware of the difficulties of the visiting a foreign country and they cannot predict the upcoming happenings such as the crime rate, policies of the city, rules that should be obeyed. Therefore, a tour guide can keep us away from dangers and the possible problems.
Paradoxically, there are some justifications by one who argues that travel agencies may exaggerate their expenses and deceive people by getting more money for some of their high-class facilities. It is not acceptable for tour companies to mistreat their customers and acquire money for the things that they are supposed to provide like their tour guides working hours which can vary for the individuals who pay less.
Taken all the points above into consideration, I am pretty convinced that there are many reasons to support the idea of making travels which led by a tour guide. There are some benefits such as experiencing convenient travel and also having a safe trip. However, people should take into account this negative point that some travel agencies may treat unfairly by getting more money for some extra facilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 410, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g more money for some extra facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2511.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98214285714 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71391366498 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501984126984 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 793.8 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8120276162 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11743436372 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391417153978 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356179831561 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702533988713 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335373273246 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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