TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When a person consider taking a journey to a foreign country, there are two methods to do this. One of them is getting assistance from a tour guide and another one is taking a trip alone. Some people are inclined toward stance that a tour guide is a good choice to travel with, however, others disagree with this idea, believing that taking a tour guide is wastage of money. As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to have a tour guide in a trip because of three reasons that are discussed the following paragraphs.
To begin with, one of benefits of traveling with a tour guide is that people will be able to explore countries. In fact, tour guides are people who know well other country’s tourism attraction. These people have a great deals of knowledge related to natural environments and national parks of foreign countries. They truly direct us to places that have museums and historical buildings. Furthermore, by traveling with a tour guide, one will be able to go to restaurant and order her or his favorite foods for lunch, as they can speak in restaurants in their language. As a consequent, taking a tour guide will enable to us to discover other countries well which, in turn, brings us enjoyable moments.
Secondly, taking a journey in a group which is led by a tour guide helps us to save money. Indeed, tour guides have special information regarding to accommodation of other countries and if our trip is led by them, we can recognize hotels where have reasonable prices. Moreover, travelers are able to spend less money for transportation in comparison with traveling alone, because tour guides inform us about the nearest ways to go to places such as shopping stores so that we can commute by expending lower of money. Therefore, vacationers economize on expense with tour guide.
The last reason why I interested in traveling with a tour guide is that I will not get lost in another counties. In fact, by traveling with tour guides, I could go to hotels, shopping centers and so forth, as they are acquaintance with directions and streets well. Not only that, but also a tour guide can identify the places where have night club which I am able to spend a good time there and return back to my residence. However, when I have a trip to a foreign country, I do not discern streets at night so, I may be get lost. So, as you can, another advantage of taking a journey with tour guides is not getting lost.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned factors, I contend that my preference is to use a tour guide. The reasons for this viewpoint are exploring foreign country carefully, saving money and not getting lost. How a trip will be interesting if you get lost in the crowded street at a foreign country?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
... am able to spend a good time there and return back to my residence. However, when I have a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67634854772 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72640000791 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46265560166 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6670346755 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.454545455 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179769585094 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647432256159 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424168804135 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114583020422 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267137281212 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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