TPO 16 - Independent Writing Task: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, travel in a group led by a tour guide is the best possible kind of trip because it is safer, cheaper, and more enjoyable than travel alone. I would cite my reasons and examples to hold this point of view in the following.
First of all, traveling with a tour will be safer comparing with doing it alone. What I mean is that tour guides are expert persons that are familiar with all aspects of trip. They know the travel area very well and they are aware of all possible dangers that may exist for passengers. For example, they know in which roads passengers will face wild animals so they do not plan that road or go there with cautious. Moreover, tour leaders have some essential skills that would may save the life of people in emergency situations.
Second, I really believe that this way of trip is much cheaper than single trip. My reason is that because the tour planners want to attract people to their tour they try hard to find the cheapest places and activities in the destination city. For example, they will find all affordable restaurants there that also are good in quality. But individuals don't have the knowledge and experience to find these cheap places. Tour authorities always sign contracts with local businesses in that city that will decrease the costs dramatically. For instance, because they have many people with them they can get good discount from hotels.
Finally, I think tours are more enjoyable than traveling alone. Tours access information of cities and all the entertainment, historical, social, and natural places in them. For instance, there may be a very beautiful waterfall in a city that only local people know it but tours also are aware of that place because of their pure database. In addition, tours will plan each moment of trip so there wouldn't be any spare time but it would be really impossible to have such a comprehensive schedule when traveling alone. This discipline will cause more fun and enjoy for travelers. Also traveling in a tour will give us the opportunity to be familiar with some new people and may we find friends among them.
As a conclusion, I prefer to travel by tour because I care about my safety, bank account, and entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79328165375 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53838061224 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50645994832 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0068174776 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146292487652 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511642971794 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421904385007 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09597980925 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367339099757 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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