TPO 2: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
It has been always a disputable issue whether we should consider telling the truth as the most significant subject in our relationships or not and it has caused heated debates over a long period of time because it affects everybody in his or her life. Although many people think that there are a lot more important considerations, if I am supposed to write about this issue I will definitely mark it as the most important consideration due to several reasons.
The first point that I would like to make is the fact that it has a direct relationship with the reliability of the person. A trustworthy person is who any one can count on him or her and take his or her advice into account and this characteristic can be affected by lying. For example, suppose your brother is telling a lie behind your back when he thinks that you have left the place and actually you are there. He can never be trusted anymore. Can he?
Another aspect of this issue and perhaps the most significant reason is the fact that telling a single lie leads to many future lies and there is always a spot that it will be revealed and its feel of shame and regret in front of others can’t be neglected. For instance, imagine that you have told your father that you will go to the library to study but actually you have hung out with your friends. This first lie leads to more lies about subjects like the book that you've studied, closing time of the library, delay of the bus and so on. Assume that you have forgotten one of your imaginary answers. What about feeling of embarrassment?
The final part refers to something may be vital for some people due to special reasons that the other one can't really understand it thoroughly. In this case, a mere lie can lead to a disaster or make a total change in the person's destiny.
In conclusion, there are many reasons answering why telling the truth is the most important consideration such as its relationship with reliability, important issues, and its future. So, if we want to evaluate a person ethically we should pay attention to this characteristic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t has caused heated debates over a long period of time because it affects everybody in his or ...
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...the person. A trustworthy person is who any one can count on him or her and take his or...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
... lies about subjects like the book that youve studied, closing time of the library, d...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e to special reasons that the other one cant really understand it thoroughly. In thi...
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Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... disaster or make a total change in the persons destiny. In conclusion, there are many...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lity, important issues, and its future. So, if we want to evaluate a person ethically ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59249329759 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68230261545 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528150134048 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7264769803 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185621893336 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543354133992 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665673226162 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106595657694 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668832932516 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.