TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
I think the key factor of being successful in our life is learning every day and trying new things and doing what we know very well and try not take risks is very bad decision it just make us lose our goals because of that I disagree with the idea that not take risks and keep doing same thing for two reason:
First of all, in my opinion, all human being like new things in all aspects of life for example they like new tools, new foods, new songs, new vehicles and even new makeups and new hairstyle. Because of this attribute of human, being dynamic and trying new things are meaningful and can make us more attractive. With power of attractiveness we can modify and manipulate everything, and ask people whatever we want, that can help us to approach ours goals to be successful.
Second, for finding new ways and new methods it is important to try new things and new ways that can make someone pioneer in specific major. We all know one of important factors of being successful is being pioneer and trying and inventing and bringing new things for society.this aim just possible with trying new things and new ways.
Finally, my idea is for being successful in the world and at the same time for being more attractive we most keep learning new things and try new ways.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48927038627 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32709071076 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480686695279 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.083307045 48.9658058833 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.333333333 100.406767564 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8333333333 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 5.45110844103 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249873958497 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131368651769 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797443268821 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176034799833 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079166301269 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 11.7677419355 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 10.002688172 510% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.