When considering how to work successfully, various of factors are crucial especially the ability to relate well to others and studying hard. In my point of view, the first and the most important is the former.
To begin with, communication is necessary to run a team for leaders. Without a good relationship, you cannot lead your team members who may have good talents to show their true abilities. Think about that if your workers dislike you, how can you require them efficiently to finish your tasks? And in the end your project is delayed or unfinished. On the contrary, if you have a good relationship with your workers, they will concentrate on the work even you never require them. What’s more, even there are difficulties, under the help of all the members, it is certain that you will overcome them. So as a leader, the first factor is to build good relationship.
Then, to be get a harmony working circumstance, controlling the ability to relate well to others is also necessary. For most people who have to work in office at least eight hours a day, it is impossible to work well with people who hate each other. On the other hand, you can ask for help to your friends and enjoy lunch time together. For example, according to a research by Peking University in 2015, if all the members have a good communication, the working efficiency can improve by two times more than working in a bad situation. So you should master this ability for working well.
Admittedly, some argue that the studying experience determines what kinds of job you may have. It seems reasonable, however, they forget that after working, the ability of communication plays a far more important role that you can get promoted more quickly than others. What’s more, if you just study well but don’t have a good relationship with others, perhaps you will be fired sooner or later.
Due to aforementioned ground, the ability to relate well to people is the most myriad characteristic for a successful individual who aim high in his life. It's rewards are related to many aspects in life including business, psychological, and financial issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, at least, for example, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8904109589 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85963095696 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6757634455 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9473684211 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250943781276 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797280881892 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401881325057 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140585143879 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020619504881 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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