It is an indisputable fact that friends make our life much more enjoyable and happier. For that, people have always been striving to build harmonious friendships. Recently, one of the most debatable issue related to this topic is that weather keeping old friends is important for someone's happiness more than making new friends. Some people believe that making new friends is better for happiness because new people give them new perspective in life which could make them delighted. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that keeping old friends is the key to happiness. In what follows, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point is that old friends are more reliable and trustworthy, which are two important components for happiness. They know us better, we share a lot in common. They are always there for us especially in tough time. real friends never let their friend down, they will do whatever it takes to make their friends happy. When it comes to expressing emotions, it is more likely to feel comfortable when we talk to old friend.Old friends are loyal to their friends, they will never betray them. people should treasure their old friends, they should go the extra miles to keep them as friends. My friend Youstina is a compelling example of that, When I was in high school, I failed my chemistry exam. I had hard time understanding balancing chemical equation, so my friend offered me to help me since she excellent in chemistry. She was generous enough to share her notes with me and free her time for me, what's more, I told her to keep my failing in chemistry as a secret between the two of us. she was very loyal and helpful. This example clearly illustrates that "a friend in need is a friend in deed".
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that old friends are very supportive. In other words, they will never criticize your choices, they encourage us to go forward and never give up. Moreover, they are always with us in thin and thick and endure the worst time with us. I vividly remember, when I was in college, my uncle passed away. I was extremely depressed to the point that I was not going to college and I decided to drop out, my friends never abandon me. They used to come to my house and calm me down with giving me unlimited support and hope to continue my life goals. I am thankful for them because they never give up on me, To wrap it up, old is gold.
In conclusion, if we contemplate the mentioned reasons, we will soon realize that maintaining old- term friendship is significant to our happiness and survive in life. Our friends are priceless and irreplacable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8329764454 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62850735058 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498929336188 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 28.0 9.59856630824 292% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8988365716 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8076923077 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9615384615 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178147063284 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523461325724 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477340992116 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116895621342 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573544995533 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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