Traffic congestion seems to be increasing. What causes do you think are the causes of it. What solution are come forth to curb it down.
Over population is the first reason for traffic congestion. It has been seen from past few decades that traffic decades that rise in human as well as development of infrastructures increased the population. As the population is more, need for transportation's increased. People as well as goods are required to be carried from one place to another. Traffic has been major setback for usual delay caused in ones life. As due to congestion of roads, lack of proper planning and scope of infrastructure causes this issue.
Traffic congestion is increasing as lack of proper infrastructure, proper roads, inadequate traffic rules and unnecessary use of vehicles. As we know that for e.g. if a two members in a family use two different cars than surely traffic will increase as if every family uses one car according to the members instead they can us public transport or same vehicle can drop family members. Also, the traffic rules should be more strict so that citizens would follow them. Fines and punishment should be given for those who not abiding the rules.
City infrastructure should be developed. Town planning should be made carefully by governing authorities. More bridges should be built so that pedestrians can walk from fly over while vehicles on road. Also, regular check up of vehicles should be made mandatory due to which sudden break down and accidents can be avoided. Also, vehicle insurance, repair, oil usage must be tracked. Encroachment of hawkers should be stopped so that road will not be crowded. Instead hawkers zone can be built. Traffic signals should have well maintenance. Also, regular staff on the high ways should be appointed. Heavy vehicles like trucks, tempo’s should have a different road, so that crowd in daily road will decrease.
Also, people should try to use public transport, trains and monorails should be used for this purpose. New software must be used for automation of traffic system in a state as implemented in London. Also, bicycles can be used for small distance and separate track can be made for it. Getting a solution for traffic congestion can be obtained by combine efforts of government as well a people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., first, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 9.8082437276 275% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78186366167 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2964386205 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148484495633 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530503886198 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336098348212 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982288320167 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177886134873 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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