In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

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In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

It can be asserted with certainty that one of the most magnificent inventions of time has been the automobile. With its advent, a seething thrill has took over people eager to see one of these dainty vehicles and feel the excitement of traveling with speed and grace. Ever since it was first presented, many companies have thrived to introduce more productive cars, competing over design, speed, size, power and safety. As a result, today we are faced with countless automobiles raging through the streets in various parts across the globe. In this regard, one might wonder about the outlook of this burgeoning industry in terms of quantity – will the streets be teamed up with more cars in the next twenty years, or will other avenues of transportation take over? Although this brilliant innovation has, without doubt, altered our lives and transformed the face of transportation, it has also been the cause of critical problems many great cities are confronted with today. Some of these issues that have been resulted from numerous cars striding about big, industrial cities have grown into a world-concerning crisis with no obvious solution at hand. Pertain to this, I believe in the next two decades, we can anticipate fewer cars in the streets, being replaced by other means of transportation. The major causes resulting to this phenomenon are elaborated below.
Air pollution has become an unsustainable global crisis of the twenty-first century, threatening major cities and towns. One of the biggest source of toxins infesting the air are automobiles. Although first thought as a subsidiary problem, this catastrophe has become so concerning that in many great cities it has been made illegal to travel via a personal car on specific days. In order to overcome this crisis, many cities across the world have enacted policies to limit the number of cars on the streets. One of these strategies is to develop various avenues of public transportation and encourage citizens to get about the city via bus, metro, taxis, bicycle, etc. Many great, industrial cities have already adopted these regulations, thus decreasing the number of cars on streets. And, with the spread of these procedures to other cities struggling with air pollution, it can be expected that in the near future we will witness fewer cars roaming the streets.
Another major problem that will probably lead to an incline in the quantity of automobiles in the future, in the eminent issue of traffic. Ironically, the cars once developed to speed up transportation have led to colossal traffic jams lasting days, and even weeks, thus wasting away precious time trapped in the stagnation of vehicles. A certain solution for this concern would be to decrease the number of private cars and cultivate new ways for people to get around. Although some might argue with this viewpoint, inclining that the solution to traffic problems lies in advancing the infrastructure – roads, highways, bridges, etc. – of the effected cities, I believe infrastructure can only alleviate the problem to some extent, whereby the reduction of cars traveling in the cities will be the ultimate key.
Regarding the discussion at hand, I also believe this general rule can’t be implied to all cities and towns. For instance, in some developing municipalities, the overall number of cars will most likely increase, as they reach the threshold on industrialization. Whereas, in advanced countries more aware of the adverse consequences of issues caused by staggering number of cars, mainly air pollution, the number of cars will show a conspicuous decline in the near future.
In general, the automobile industry is an ever-changing one with an ambiguous future. But it can be concluded that in order to overcome the major struggles resulted from numerous cars in major municipalities, the number of vehicles will show a reduction in the decades to come.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... With its advent, a seething thrill has took over people eager to see one of these d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, regarding, so, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, in general, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 115.0 52.1666666667 220% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3280.0 1977.66487455 166% => OK
No of words: 637.0 407.700716846 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14913657771 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02382911018 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88112402047 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 315.0 212.727598566 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1020.6 618.680645161 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6021058013 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.153846154 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193875146366 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557438929555 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514635829391 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118578891817 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154959231063 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 86.8835125448 197% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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