In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
there is a widely held perception that in the future people use more machines in their daily life because of the twenty-first century which is well known for high technology century all over the world. As a matter of fact fewer and fewer people driving a car in these days because of many plausible reasons. As far as I concerned that people more concern own wellness and health due to their daily hazardous habitats so they seem to me would prefer cycling or walking to the job or school rather than driving a car. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, having own auto calls for a lot of responsibilities such as the economy and abiding the law of driving. The Highest speed and latest mode car is much more required petrol and maintain meaning that demand a lot of money to spent in. furthermore, you have to pay extra taxes for your car to the government so it’s highly valid that having a car is costly nowadays. Therefore I assume that fewer people will be using the car in the following twenty years than today. Moreover, it goes without saying that people would rather be walking or riding a bicycle than stuck in the traffic jam all day. since it is clearly seen that wasting their time on waiting the next a few meters moving instead they can spend on their time more usefully things such as being with own family. For instance, my grandfather is the taxi’s driver and he has been stuck in the congestion for the recent 10 years. Sometimes he says that he wanted to abandon his job on account of just only the traffic tie-up. you can obviously see from this case that having cars negative impact on individuals mental health, even more, the whole society’s welfare.
Secondly, the modern generation bothers to living in a healthy way and afraid of having serious illnesses such as cancers and diabetes or allergy because of their daily hazardous habitats. my experience is a compelling example of this. Every day I go to school riding my bicycle helping me to shape my weight which is derived from eating lack of nutrients fast food and sitting in front of the computer for a long time. furthermore, my parents also choose a healthy life which is doing a workout at least 1 hour a week. Unfortunately, we haven't enough time to do it so we decide to walk or ride a bicycle to commute instead of driving a car. it is interesting to note that our grandparents did a lot of physical activity in their job and expecting their free time. In contrast, in one or two decades ago we are sitting in front of the computer all day then, we are tired to go home eating unhealthy foods. Luckily, now we take this issue more seriously day by day and do something against decreasing our longevity. you can see the results of declining preference of devouring the vehicles all the news.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that there will be few vehicle users in our community in the next twenty years. since people tend to live in good condition and not having distress about useless things and having a good background of the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, at least, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 557.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58168761221 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53580734144 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524236983842 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 798.3 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9485950396 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2083333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.79166666667 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217552593938 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642339426184 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146678974276 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129399636898 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925591350724 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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