In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

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In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

In the present context, one of the most common and vital part of a human life has become transportation. Specifically speaking, the automobiles like cars are the most popular means of transport. Owing to the busy life and the availability of cars as a means to commute they've become quite popular at the moment. However, what about its future in the coming days? Now, with respect ot the booming population worldwide, greatest of all investments in the infrastructure globally and presence of no such exact alternative for cars, it can be easily projected they are bound to rule for the longest of times.

As the first and preliminary justification, it is important to address the rising population in the world. With larger number of people, there is easily going to be higher demand of every kind of resources. Cars being no exception to this, they are going to be more in use than ever before. A perfect illustration can be that of a family who needs to drop the children to school, buy groceries, go to offices, and run many other errands. The more families there are, greater will be the demand of cars. This justifies how world will be in need of more of these medium of transportation.

After adressing the issue of global population, it becomes mandatory to take into the account of the world investments, that have been found to be greatest spent in infrastructures in the presnt scenario. These big investements have been made so that they can earn profits in the future. For instance, companies like Global Motors, one of the biggest companies in the world have their greatest share in the cars. This shows how we can predict the booming future of the cars.

Now, even if we pause, disregard any of the above points and try to look into this case from retrospective, we'll realize that there are actually no possible exact alternatives to replace the cars anytime near in the future. Even if we take other medium of transportation like trains and public buses, we'll discover that these can not meet the individual needs of all the public. Furthermore, airways are not affordable for all and waterways are not accessible to all owing to poor econpmy and landlockedenss of some nations repectively, leaving pretty much no other options.

To sum up, there is no chance that there are going to be any less cars in coming days than at present. In fact, there are chances that they are going to be even higher in numbers because of the large demand from greater number of people, bigger investments by companies and the perfect suitablity to meet the needs of people than any other transports.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...ilability of cars as a means to commute theyve become quite popular at the moment. How...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...o chance that there are going to be any less cars in coming days than at present. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, in fact, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77827050998 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76908265357 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490022172949 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2254929411 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.55 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161027238793 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529022838336 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069647086894 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891868316364 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752385261653 0.0645574589148 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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