We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
Work is an important aspect of our lives. No matter what we do or where we are, we cannot escape our responsibilities in work or at school. We spend more time at work during the week than we do with our families, thus the quality of co-workers are important for us to create satisfying work environment. Some people believe that a good co-worker should be a smart and an expert person. While others focus on different traits. In my view, being adaptable and helpful are the most important characteristics for co-worker for many reasons.
The first one, a good co-worker is able to adjust to new changes. When you work at a firm or an organizations, you could face abrupt changes such as changing in routines or procedures. A good co-worker does not stubborn when new circumstances have been introduced on short notice, also does not complain about new procedures. For instance, I have been working at a Walgreens for a year. Almost every two or three weeks, our boss will schedule new hours shifts or changing work flow based on certain circumstances. Every person including me at the pharmacy seem fine, except one of my colleague. He always started complaining about his new hours shifts, which make us confused and distracted. Or incase of new task assigned to him, he refused doing so; consequently, it would delay the work flow for preparing prescriptions. Because of my colleague negative attitude, we were so nervous and unrelaxed many times at the pharmacy. Therefore, from this experience, I have learned that working with a flexible person is pretty important.
Moreover, a good co-worker offers assistant. He/she helps out when a colleague fails to handle a situation properly, or who does not understand how to do it precisely. For example, even though I am working at the pharmacy for a while, there are many areas I am not fully understood. Such as, filling certain prescriptions as well as health insurance policy plans. Because of working at a busy pharmacy, sometimes I compelled to call to an insurance company regarding some issue with patient’s prescriptions. And thus, I always need help. My senior pharmacy technician, who is a well- respected old lady, always provide me with her help and support. Last week, when I was calling an insurance company about patient’s coverage plan, I wasn’t familiar with some company representative’s questions and thus, I became so embarrassed. Although my senior technician was busy, without asking, she approach me offering her assistant, then she started writing down some notes to help me answering company’s man questions. And finally, with her help I fixed the problem. As you can see, working with someone who is supportive, and helpful is very crucial in the work. Especially for those whom they deal with people’s life.
In short, there are many characteristics that co-workers should have in order to be a professional person . The most two important are being adaptable to any changes and also helpful to others. Every person should possess these traits not only reduce work’s pressure, but also in order to get job done well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in short, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2632.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11067961165 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17112066147 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1813842957 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7586206897 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7586206897 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302289384747 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838386455188 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067021776379 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19620746406 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771835654088 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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