What are some qualities of a good parent?
From my point of view, a good parent should have important qualities such as kindness, responsibility, helpfulness, reliability and it seems very difficult to prefer one to another but I would like to choose kindness and responsibility. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, a good father or mother is kind. He/she never punishes his/her children or sets rules against them. They should behave toward children respectfully so that their children will learn how to behave toward other people in future. They spend several hours a day playing with their children, taking them to park or cinema, talking with them and finding solutions for their problems and so forth.
In the second place, a good parent is responsible. He/she buys necessary items such as food, clothes, toys for his/her children. Good parents take their children to schools and help them do their homework. If children have difficulties learning lessons, they parents will teach them or hire a tutor for them. Children are more prone to become sick and in these conditions a responsible father should take his child to hospital.
Last but not least, good parents help children choose their majors in university and jobs. They should prevent their sons or daughters from smoking or drinking and advise them in the right time. In addition, if their children want to choose a spouse, they should introduce nice boys or girls to them. For example, in my country, it is mother’s duty to choose a wife for his son.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that there are many significant qualities for a good parent but I find myself more inclined to choose kindness and responsibility based on the reasons which I outlined above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...learn how to behave toward other people in future. They spend several hours a day playing...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...ave difficulties learning lessons, they parents will teach them or hire a tutor for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02693602694 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74505158212 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.229253883 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150833133772 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648497751755 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819954066535 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102896509539 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515267868018 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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