What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age?
Nowadays, many countries have suffered several changes in their demography. We can name among others industrialization its foremost consequence, the migration. In the last years, this phenomena have made that small towns left almost empty, because young people are leaving towns for going to bigger cities. However, not all is said about it, there are changes to be made toward shrink these migration flows, such as bringing to town more technology, encouraging central government to reduce taxes for people in town and finally increase the number of jobs.
First, more technology. One of the reason for living a hometown it is because of young people love to meet new friends and stay in touch with them. However, these days, the vast majority of communication is made through internet and mobile phone; hence, if the young people have the sense of being connected with the rest of the world, they may not feel the necessity of leave the town.
Second, reduce taxes. Considering the reduce of taxation charged to people who stay in their hometown, can be a powerful reason to stay and work there. For example in several countries, the more far the town is located, the more benefit in taxation enjoy.
Finally, stimulate the labor market. Although, many reasons for leave the hometown can be mentioned, the scarcity of jobs is by far the most important. Whatever the location or the beauty of landscapes, if people do not have a decent job means that town is condemned to emptiness. Hence, a very effective way to avoid migration out of the town is to stimulate the labor market in order to improve the numbers and quality of jobs. For examples, there are countries, which has small towns full of people working in mining activities.
In summary, despite existing several reason to leave hometown, it is also true, that things can be done to avoid this phenomena, for instance, providing internet based technology, implementing financial benefits and foremost stimulating the labor market. Moreover, if authorities succeed in implementing this advices, they will shrink the migration flows.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08115942029 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68385450132 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9658658862 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108751196084 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387278625925 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313594987117 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673299207851 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276933745914 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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