What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?
Frankly, in the last 100 years, countless innovations and discoveries like telephone, computer, the Internet and some new discoveries in the field of biology or genetics have occurred in the world. From my point of view, the most beneficial discovery for people in my country was recombinant DNA technology. I believe that this technology is important for people all around the world and has affected our lives dramatically. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, scientists can make numerous recombinant proteins with this technology. They have produced various hormones such as insulin, factor VIII, growth hormone, etc. Many people depend on these drugs for their survival and without these proteins, they cannot live more than a week.
In the second place, scholars have modified the genome of important plants with the help of recombinant DNA technology. They have manipulated the genome of wheat, rice, some fruits and vegetables to produce better plants. These genetically modified foods are more resistant to pesticides, diseases and harsh environmental conditions. Besides, they have more essential nutrients like minerals, fatty acids, pigments and so forth.
Last but not least, recombinant DNA technology has saved numerous lives. Researches apply this technology to cure patients with dangerous diseases like cancer, hepatitis, AIDS, etc. For example, a researcher discovered the hepatitis B vaccine with the help of recombinant DNA technology.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that, recombinant DNA technology is the most significant discovery in the last 10 years for people not only in my country, but also for people all around the world. It has helped us insert new genes in the genome of plants and animals with better characteristics, produce recombinant drugs or vaccines and other useful products which I outlined above.
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Suggestion:
...the help of recombinant DNA technology. Taking all the aforementioned arguments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, frankly, if, second, so, for example, such as, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48504983389 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94148103528 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7876936222 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198545286799 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574290189332 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861625303208 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109173415966 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100458690203 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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