“What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.”
I belong to a country which was colonized under the British Government for over a 100 years. The industrial development was poor and the economy was in shambles . In the post independence era the discovery of the vast natural resources in our country especially the coal mines have played a significant role in the development of my country , India.
In the colonization phase the masters imported good and sold at a hefty price to the natives. Manufacturing industry was almost non existent . It was after independence that we started looking inwards to utilize the available resources. India is actually diverse country rich in many natural resources.We discovered coal mines in the states of Bihar , Jharkhand and Assam. We developed our coal mines to extract fuel and start the industrialization of our young nation.
Coal is actually a very useful and multipurpose resource. It can be used to generate electricity , power turbines and heavy machines, used as fuel to power steam engines . Electrification provided a boost to almost every sector. Heavy industries were set up and imports were reduced .Transportation using the railway network was powered by coal. It connected the millions of people fostering trade . India made progress in industrialization and the economy improved.
The city homes were now powered by electricity generated from coal ,and brought the era of television and electronic media. As a developing nation , rural electrification was less dominant . Villages were nonetheless dependent on coal as fuel source for cooking .Farmers used coal for irrigation purposes
From cities to villages and industrialist to farmers , coal had an impact on the lives of all the citizens. No wonder it was termed 'black gold' once upon a time .Due to the aforementioned ground , I would cite coal as one of the most beneficial discoveries for the people of my country in the last 100 years .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, nonetheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1986970684 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15755064563 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1517954019 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94444444444 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120765665831 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349598441461 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526542612362 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763004897187 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528168393086 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.